Uhm. Read this.

[aw darn it]

It's just a silly little poem I wrote in a class. Nothin' too much.

Just wanted you guys to read it and maybe add your input if you wanted.

[ Journal ]

 

[Skrapz]

I likes it. very simple.  

[aw darn it]

Skrapz

I likes it. very simple.

Why thank you.
Yeah, it was a pretty quick little poem.
Nice and cheesy.

 

[Skrapz]

Adele Adaure

Skrapz

I likes it. very simple.

Why thank you.
Yeah, it was a pretty quick little poem.
Nice and cheesy.

Cheesy is perfect. Now if you could return the favor perhaps?  

[aw darn it]

Skrapz

Oh, it's very good.
It would probably make more sense if I'd read the book you're reading, but it's very good.
The rhymes aren't forced, which is excellent. And it certainly gives off the war-torn feeling, as I'm sure that's what you were going for.

 

[Stormgem]

Adele Adaure

Nice!!! I, like Skrapz, admire the fact it is really simple. I can't find anything to pull apart or improve! ^^

Check this out if you can be bothered.....its one of mine, probably one of my better works....

 

[aw darn it]

Stormgem

Oh, nice. <3
It seems a bit scatterish, so you'd have to actually pay attention and read the poem through to see it.
But it's nice. C:

 

[XI Maria Kurenai IX]

Skrapz

Adele Adaure

Skrapz

I likes it. very simple.

Why thank you.
Yeah, it was a pretty quick little poem.
Nice and cheesy.

Cheesy is perfect. Now if you could return the favor perhaps?

Lol why does it go to my journal??  

[Skrapz]

XI Maria Kurenai IX

Skrapz

Adele Adaure

Skrapz

I likes it. very simple.

Why thank you.
Yeah, it was a pretty quick little poem.
Nice and cheesy.

Cheesy is perfect. Now if you could return the favor perhaps?

Lol why does it go to my journal??

I accidentally linked the go to my journal page. Here, try this.  

[odd j davenport]

Pretty, very pretty...