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 Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:13 pm
What do you think of my poetry? I have written other small poems but these two are the best ones I have:
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:14 pm
Moonlight:
I hate living in a backwords world
Where words and faces are only worth
The unreadable thoughts behind them
I hate living in a backwords world
Where people and places are only worth
The people willing to see them
And you are worth so much more
Than greedy hands and grasping fingers and glazed eyes
That linger
I wish your eyes would linger on my one last time
So I could fall back into them
Because your eyes are the most beautiful eyes
That I have ever seen
Like Evergreens
In the winter
And though they’re broken and cold
They’re worth a heck of a lot more than my eyes
Which look like the dirt of those Evergreens
Always looking up and always wanting to see them.
I hate living in a backwords world
Where the most loving people are subject
To hatred and harsh stares and howling in pain to the moonlight
Your breath was like the moonlight
It washed over me in waves that said
“I love you”
But you won’t say “I love you” will you?
Because while we’re loving each other from accross the globe
And out of everybody, nobody knows
You still can’t say those goddamned words
Those ******** words
That would open you up to the pain again
But baby I promise if you open up again
And let me in
You will never hurt again
And if you invest the trust to lean on me
I will never let you fall
So can you say the words of the moonlight
Whisper them gently in my ear
We can open up in this backwards world
Where we refuse to hold onto the one thing that could make us stable
Baby please hold onto me
And I will never let you go
I will always show you the good in the world
The beauty of “I love you”
Baby please say the words of the moonlight
And I’ll say them too…
I love you.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:15 pm
Side Effect:
I miss the high you gave me before I crashed
I loved the feeling of dizzy, weightless
But then my skin broke out
A red itching rash that would not go away
I came crashing down and saw
The my loves and my truths were just
Delusions
Set up by you
To keep my drunk on you
You were one hallucinigine
So strong you made me feel life
You made me feel love
I was compassionate, impassioned
Fascinated by your passion
And blinking, wincing, gasping, begging,
For an ounce of you
That high
All of the school signs
All of the t-shirts, all of the research
Never pointed to you, never warned me of you
What you could do
Because one minute I was singing so high and fly above that
I couldn’t even feel the words in my mouth
And yet the next
I couldn’t get them out
Past the sobs, the tears
Past my bleary eyes
Staring at the ceiling
And trying to get them out of my mouth
They never knew I’d be sick
I never meant to be sick
You never said I’d be sick
But you sir
Are sick.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:13 pm
They sound absolutely awesome ^_^
Only thing that bothers me is the cussing. I know there isn't much, but well, me being me, I really don't like cussing in music, poetry, or books sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:28 pm
Atomic Poppy They sound absolutely awesome ^_^ Only thing that bothers me is the cussing. I know there isn't much, but well, me being me, I really don't like cussing in music, poetry, or books sweatdrop hehe well thank you :3 And I know that profanity isn't normally appropriated, but I was just feeling that raw, that strongly, I don't really censor myself when it comes to my writing.
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Posted: Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:37 pm
Denkou Soshiatae Atomic Poppy They sound absolutely awesome ^_^ Only thing that bothers me is the cussing. I know there isn't much, but well, me being me, I really don't like cussing in music, poetry, or books sweatdrop hehe well thank you :3 And I know that profanity isn't normally appropriated, but I was just feeling that raw, that strongly, I don't really censor myself when it comes to my writing. You're welcome ^_^ lol I kinda do that myself. I write something "dirty" then I quickly erase it and write something new over it xD
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