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 Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2017 8:32 pm
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Full Name: Rukai "Roxas" X
Nickname: X, Slave 199, Tea Boy
Age: 24
Birthdate: Nov 6
Gender: Male
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 180 lbs
Nindo:
Personality:
Village: None
Title: None
Rank: D
First Class: Taijutsu
____Discipline → Brawler
Second Class: Taijutsu
____Discipline → Berserker
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Bloodline: Yozen no Soutou [ Feeble Existence's Complete Annihilation ]
Chakra Pool: 150
Stamina Pool: 350
Chakra Element: Katon || Doton
Chakra Color: Red
Chakra Materialization: Tattoos glow red
Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► Moderate
→→ Taijutsu Discipline +3
• Speed ► Moderate
→→ Taijutsu Discipline +3
• Reflex ► Moderate
→→ Taijutsu Discipline +3
• Fortitude ► Moderate
→→ Taijutsu Discipline +3
Strengths:
• Taijutsu
• Bloodline
Weaknesses:
• Cannot rely heavily on Bukijutsu
• Allies
Fears:
• People finding out he can't use his sword
• Dying a nobody
Reductions:
• Learn Taijutsu (2) posts faster
• Fuuinjutsu are performed at one [1] rank less chakra.
Personal Attributes:
• Stubborn Mutt: Rukai will not have his own taijutsu negated while his Renshu is active due to his commitment to the style.
• One additional taijutsu slot
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Ryo: 両{0}
AC: 0
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 08
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 03 / 03
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: Large broad sword
Weapon Range: 3 feet
Weapon Weight: 60 lbs
Weapon Size:
Weapon Location: Strapped to his back
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• Flack jacket
• 10 shuriken
• {Personal objects kept by the character should be listed here. The rule is that if it isn't listed in your inventory, your character does not have it! This includes articles of clothing, gear such as a headband, hair ties, jewelry, etc. }
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} Doton
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{Your second element's name} Katon
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Yozen no Soutou [ Feeble Existence's Complete Annihilation ]
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{Your first Type's name}
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{Your second Type's name}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
King Of The Iron Fist
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
The Kaiser Fist
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
Kyouzou
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s
Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
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Birth--
Rukai is the illegitimate son of ????. He never did have the chance to meet him or his mother as a matter of fact. His existence was shame to the Iron Throne which already had enough of it's fair share of drama. The boy could not and would not exist. He didn't know about this. All he had for proof of his lineage was a sword. The sword was so heavy he only managed to swing it when he became a grown man. Rukai was sent to live in hiding with servants looking after him. These servants were assassins meant to kill him if he would ever escape or someone attempted to kidnap him. They even marked his body with death seals in order to assure this. He was only alive, because Lord **** was a merciful man. For 5 years they watched over the growing boy. The two assassins slowly began developing feelings towards the boy. They taught him basic things in terms of fighting. The boy wasn't very bright when it came to ninjutsu, but wasn't completely inept and genjutsu was way too complex of a concept to teach someone his age. Bukijutsu was his weakest area and they could tell that no matter how hard he trained he would never be able to fight decently with a sword. During the fifth year he was with them they came under attack by an unknown group. Protocol was to try and defend, but never sacrifice their lives for the boy. If it came to it they would active the seals, kill him and leave. Yet they couldn't bring themselves to do it. They told the boy to hide and they would come back for him. They never came back, but someone did. Under the floor boards the boy waited until a man wearing all black, gask mask and shrouded pulled up the boards to reveal the infant. Rukai remembers the words he heard back then. "Howdy, partner. You better be worth the hassle." He spoke before pulling the boy up by the throat.
Slave Years--
Rukai didn't know where he was going back then. If he did maybe he would've asked the care takers to have actually killed him instead of sparring his life. "You're gonna work harder than you have ever worked in your miserable life." The man who had kidnapped him spoke before spitting. The boy was in a wagon with several other people. Children and adults cuffed together all future slaves. One of them would keep on rambling desperately. Rukai remembers this, because it was the first time he'd seen someone die in front of him. It wouldn't be the last by a long s**t. The man annoyed the kidnapper so much that he stopped the wagon, hopped off, pulled the rambler down by the throat and slowly strangled him. Once he was done the man said "Can ya'll hear it? Sweet sound of silence. Shew!" This man, Rukai would later find out, was named Earl. His new caretaker.
Their destination was the Bear Country on the border of the Earth country. Once their the boy and those with him were thrown into the mines. Their was no sympathy for the boy's young age either. He had the option to either work or die and he watched many die. It was practically impossible for the boy to survive just by his own will and he didn't. He had the aid of those around him in the beginning. He was the youngest of the slaves. The only reason he was there was the fact that Earl almost died when he found the boy. Rukai always wondered how someone like Earl had taken down his caretakers who were trained assassins. They obviously didn't abandon him since he would always remind the boy of how much of a hassle it had been to grab him.
The boy grew with those around him as the mining system also grew. The boy through hardship developed a very strong and resilient body. As for training he had completely neglected it due to the fact that he never had the time nor energy. The watchers themselves killed anyone they found attempting anything with jutsu at the end. One day a new wave of slaves arrived. Among the slaves was a girl. She would be the domino that would begin the chain of events in the boy's life. The minute he laid his eyes on her he was completely in love. Her body was covered in the most beautiful markings. From head to toe. When she was taken off the wagon she looked at him with fierce eyes that he knew would lead to trouble. No one ever managed to escape. The watchers made sure of it. Earl took great pleasure in hunting those who tried down and the show he made out of it when he finally caught them still haunts Rukai. He immediately approached the girl to warn her about running away. She spat at his feet. Called him a coward and walked away. He knew he couldn't just let her go through with it. He kept his eye on her and tracked her movements.
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2017 7:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2017 10:39 am
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[ Yin Release - The Devil's Ambassador][Genjutsu is an insidious thing with many utilities. The human mind is a fickle thing and some people respect the boundaries and only use genjutsu as it is necessary. Others however revel in the idea of breaking the mind of their enemies. Battle to Genjutsu enthusiasts and sadists is a game. How long will the opponent stand the onslaught of despair? The Devil's Embassador is truly a style for the twisted individuals of the shinobi world.]
___Relevant Training: Hard Mental
___Notes:
• Style requires a theme. Not using a theme results in penalties. Themes may be as simple as 'Gothic Horror' and 'Killer Carnival', or as terrifying as 'Kittens and Rainbows'.
• Requires Korabo training.
• Techniques involving Fear follow hazard guidelines.
___S t a g e O n e [ E ]
[ The Contract - Harbringer of Death ]
Rank: X
Description: The user must make a contract seal out of battle, with the Shinigami itself, by permanently deducting an amount of chakra from one's maximum. This contract can be done on any surface, but the object to which the contract is written on must remain on the user's person. As long as it exists and has the blood of the signer on it, the effects are active, and the user must adhere to a strict theme in his or her genjutsu combat. Failure to stick to the theme by performing a genjutsu out of said parameter results in the techniques misfiring. (e.g. no effect, chakra is still consumed) On the other hand, the contract increases the strength (e.g. rank) of the genjutsu used during battle, by one [1]. Techniques only up to the rank of the contract can be altered.
幽霊 [ Ghost ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Techniques in which the user disappears from the enemies sight that are paired with this cause the opponent to go under the effects of Fear, for one [1] post per rank of the corresponding technique used. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'GH'.
それはあなたを見ている [ It Watches ]
Rank: E :: Training, Spiritual
Description: So long as a paired Genjutsu is in effect, the opponent constantly has a feeling that someone is watching them throughout the battle. Must reference at least once per post and engage in this mentality. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'IT'.
___S t a g e T w o [ D ]
死神 [ Shinigami ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: For every post the opponent is under the hazard [Fear] from any source, the user will gradually take on an applicable body form that resembles the theme to which they are committing. After 3 posts the transformation is complete. If the target looks at the user's complete transformation, one of their 2 offensive activations will misfire. (e.g. chakra consumed, but no effect). Requires number generator.
呪われた鎖 [ Chains Of The Damned ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Chained genjutsu of the same theme gain a half a rank in strength following their subsequent usage. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'CD'.
イノセンス [ Innocence ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Base Duration: // Upkeep: 1/2 rank of paired illusion. (rounded up to near integer)
Description: Once activated the afflicted will not consider kai to be enough to break out of a paired genjutsu and will injure their body in order to break out of even the simplest genjutsu.
___S t a g e T h r e e [ C ]
失われた [ The Lost ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Opponents inflicted with the hazard [Fear] must pay a half rank extra for every dose to kai out of paired illusions. Does not stack with the Inception discipline. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'TL'.
魂のない [ Soulless ]
Rank: X :: Spiritual
Description: Can be paired with a genjutsu to dull a shinobi's ability to sense or detect Chakra up to the rank of the illusion, for one [1] post per rank of the Genjutsu it is paired with. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'SL'.
明快さの瞬間 [ Moment Of Clarity ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: For one post, at the users will, all effects and paired genjutsu currently placed upon an opponent are suspended, giving them a sense of confidence and hope. Any action they perform appears to cancel in their following post when reality comes crashing down on them once again, and everything that disappeared returns. Techniques which require the following can instead have Moment of Clarity fill its requirement: "Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts."
___S t a g e F o u r [ B ]
絶望 [ Despair ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted will become desperate as they realize they cannot escape their reality and stops acting rationally for one post. In this post they must use all of their activations. If they are incapable of doing so, their despair will cause an additional dose of [Fear].
死の扉 [ Death's Door ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Paired Genjutsu will create the illusion of death. This will take away a supplemental activation from the enemy in relation to the action taking place. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'DD'.
最も暗いダンジョン [ Darkest Dungeon ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: Every post of [Fear] gained for the next two [2] of the target's posts accrues another stack of [Fear]. If, during this time, six [6] stacks of [Fear] are present on the target, this technique is allowed to transition itself into a Moment of Clarity.
___S t a g e F i v e [ A ]
マゾヒズム [ Masochism ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted in their despair will become more prone to inflicting pain on to themselves in order to cope with the harsh reality. If the target performs an offensive action in their next post, the technique(s) used will also be hostile to them.
パラノイア [ Paranoia ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted in their despair, within the paired Genjutsu, will become paranoid of everyone and everything. They will therefore negate all buffs given to them by allies and deny their aid, if possible. If used in conjunction with the technique "It Watches" applies stacks of fear every post of it's duration. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'Para'.
不合理な [ Irrational ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted in their despair, within the paired Genjutsu, will become irrational in their train of thought and actions. The enemy must select an array of techniques he or she wants to use and number them. Depending on how many activations they decide to use they will generate either one, two or three numbers. These represent the techniques they will use. (i.e. roll a number of die)
___S t a g e S i x [ S ]
戦争 [ War ]
Rank: S :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Can only be used at a battle's conclusion, after the opponent's mind has been broken. In their minds, vivid images of a paired illusion will flash ceaselessly. All the horrors of war will flood their mind as the agony of the slain reverberate in their memories. For each minute placed under this duress (2 posts), the target's Body Rank will be reduced to the next lowest one (Genin minimum), and last for as many posts as there are doses of [Fear]. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix 'War'.
影でモールド [ Molded By The Shadows ]
Rank: S :: Training
Description: In order for one to become fear itself he or she must overcome their own. This technique requires 10 posts to be learned and required the user to overcome his or her fears in these posts. Once complete the user will lose all fears listed in profile and become immune to the Fear Hazard.
悪魔の右手 [ The Devil's Right Hand ]
Rank: S :: Training
Description: Mastery of this style grants the user a single passive genjutsu around themselves. The chakra cost is permanently deducted from the user's max. This genjutsu applies a stack of [Fear] for every single post of direct contact, two [2] posts of conversation, or three [3] posts of being within three [3] meters of one's self.
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Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2017 3:40 pm
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malavaes Feel free to delete this shite later
[The Devil's Embassador]
[Genjutsu is an insidious thing with many utilities. The human mind is a fickle thing and some people respect the boundaries and only use genjutsu as it is necessary. Others however revel in the idea of breaking the mind of their enemies. Battle to Genjutsu enthusiasts and sadists is a game. How long will the opponent stand the onslaught of despair? The Devil's Embassador is truly a style for the twisted individuals of the shinobi world.]
___Relevant Training: Hard Mental
___Notes:
• Style requires a theme. Not using a theme results in penalties. Provide examples of plausible themes
• Does not require Korabo training. Will require Korabo training or some similar offset
• Techniques involving Fear follow hazard guidelines
___S t a g e O n e [ E ]
The Contract - Harbringer of Death[ Translation ]
Rank: X
Description: The user must make a contract seal out of battle. This contract can be done on any surface. As long as it exists it and has the blood of the signer on it the effects are active. Destruction of contract voids the positives and the negatives will always persist even if a new contract is created. The user must adhere to a strict theme in his or her genjutsu combat for life. Failure to stick to the theme and perform a genjutsu out of said parameter results in techniques losing the rank invested into said contract. On the other hand the amount of chakra invested into the contract increases the strength (rank) of the genjutsu used during battle. Usually you make a contract with something. May want to include, makes a contract with something relevant that fits the intended theme. i.e if your theme is rock monsters the blood seal must be formed on a rock. genjutsu out of said parameter results in techniques losing the rank invested into said contract> I don't get what you're trying to say here. This contract thing sounds like the bread and butter of the style. To put this simpler and make it high risk high reward. Keeping to the contract theme maintains the Gen bonus, breaking the contract theme simply makes the intended paired Gen simply not work at all. You can also just throw the whole contract thing away and just call it a Blood Seal
Ghost[幽霊]
Rank: X
Description: Techniques in which the user disappears from the enemies sight that are paired with this cause the opponent to go under the effects of Fear. For [1] post per rank of the corresponding technique used. Additional uses refresh the effect but do not stack~needed a limiter here
Souless[魂のない]
Rank: X
Description: Can be paired with a genjutsu to null a persons ability to sense or detect Chakra for [1] post per rank of the Genjutsu it is paired with. After knowing what this actually does this needs to be moved to a higher stage. Seeing as when paired with an invisibility or sight severing Genjutsu there would effectively no way of detecting the user. It also needed a limiter.
___S t a g e T w o [ D ]
Innocence[イノセンス]
Rank: X
P/S. Sense: Sight // Sound Remove these, this would make it a technique not an alteration style. The sense affected are the ones of the paired gen.
Base Duration: // Upkeep: Indefinite Upkeep of 5 is too high for something this strong. The upkeep will be 1/2 the chakra of the paired Genjutsu for balance
Description: Once activated the afflicted will not consider kai to be enough to break out of a paired genjutsu and will injure their body in order to break out of even the simplest genjutsu. This might need to be upped as well to a higher stage but these discussions are usually made by the mods later
Shinigami[死神]
Rank: X :: Training : Spiritual
Description: For every post the opponent is under fear from any source, the user will gradually take on a demonic form that resembles the theme they are commiting too. After 3 posts the transformation is complete. While looking at the user or being in the same vicinity the enemy will lose an offensive activation.
Chains Of The Damned[呪われた鎖]
Rank: X :: Training : Spiritual
Description: Chained genjutsu of the same theme gain a half a rank in strength following their subsequent usage.
___S t a g e T h r e e [ C ]
It Watches[それはあなたを見ている]
Rank: C :: Training : Spiritual
P/S. Sense: Sight // Sound Non again you don't need these, these are alterations not techniques
Base Duration: // Upkeep: Indefinite 10 Chakra If it's in the C-section and it's rank is C the upkeep is half the original.
Description:So long as a paired Genjutsu is in effect Opponent constantly has feeling that someone is watching them throughout the battle. Must reference at least once per post and engage in this mentality. Honestly I would recommend dropping this down to Stage D and even changing its rank to D. This is a minor compulsion effect that doesn't have any real use aside from being unsettling.
The Lost[失われた]
Rank: X :: Training : Spiritual
Description: Opponents inflicted with Fear must pay half rank extra for each post of fear to kai out of genjutsu. If were following previous suggestions of keeping things simple 1-rank extra against a paired Genjutsu. This boils down to so long as the opponent is feared you will always have a 2-rank advantage because of blood contracts passive of 1-rank increase which seems like more than enough. Seeing as you may have taken The Inception discipline already which is already a 3-rank advantage on its own.
Moment Of Clarity[明快さの瞬間]
Rank: X
P/S. Sense: Sight // Sound, touch Nope you don't need this you're pairing it with something, you're making genjutsu techs as oppose to genjutsu alterations
Base Duration: // Upkeep: 1 posts 10 chakra also don't need this
Description: For one post, at the users will all effects and paired genjutsu currently placed upon opponent disappear giving them a sense of confidence and hope. Any action they perform appears canceled(we're working with gen after all) in their following post when reality comes crashing down on them once again and everything that disappeared returns.
___S t a g e F o u r [ B ]
Despair [絶望]
Rank: X :: Training : Spiritual
Description: Can only be used after Moment of Clarity. The afflicted will become desperate as they realize they cannot escape their reality and stops acting rationally for one post. In this post they must use all of their activations. If they are incapable of doing so their despair will pass on over to the next post.
Death's Door [死の扉]
Rank: X :: Training : Spiritual
Description: Paired Genjutsu will create the illusion of death this will take away a supplemental activation from the enemy in relation to the action taking place. If feared this will additionally take an offensive action~ you're in the B's now if the style revolves around fear and the contract its best it start kicking in with bigger combos round here.
Darkest Dungeon[最も暗いダンジョン]
Rank: X :: Training : Spiritual
Description: Every post of Fear counts as a stack of Fear. At 10 stacks the opponent will suffer a Heart Attack in battle. There is no guideline for fear as a hazard. I'll leave this up to you but you should really expand on this. Consider fear as dosages of a hazard and develop a progressive line of symptoms. example 2 dosages of fear {opponent begins to tremble heavily} {4 Doses of fear target typically begins to flee} {6 doses panic}, {8 Doses procs the Adrenaline in Eisei for the last hurrah} and {10 Doses is the cardiac arrest}
___S t a g e F i v e [ A ]
Masochism[マゾヒズム]
Rank: X :: Training : Spiritual
P/S. Sense: Sight // Sound, touch Wanna know why the gen styles we have don't have these? I think you already know by now.
Base Duration: // Upkeep: 3 posts 15 chakra
Description: Can only be used after Moment of Clarity. The afflicted in their despair will become more prone to inflicting pain onto themselves in order to cope with the harsh reality. Consumes one offensive activation(afflicted's activation) that will be used on the afflicted. You are aware the self harm will break them out of all of the Genjutsu's right?As in the upkeep here is self defeating?
Paranoia [パラノイア]
Rank: X : Spiritual
P/S. Sense: Sight // Sound, touch
Base Duration: // Upkeep: 3 posts Upkeep 20 Chakra
Description: Can only be used after Moment of Clarity. The afflicted in their despair within the paired Genjutsu used with Moment of Clarity will become paranoid of everyone and everything. They will therefore negate all buffs given to them by allies and deny their aid. This should be more of a Stage B. and swapped with Darkest Dungeon Imo or hell put Darkest Dungeon in the S replacing War and then move move this to A and War to B, if you're fond of war that is
Irrational[不合理な]
Rank: X : Spiritual
P/S. Sense: Sight // Sound, touch{ gettin tired of these boyo}
Base Duration: // Upkeep: 3 posts 20 Chakra Upkeep
Description: Can only be used after Moment of Clarity. The afflicted in their despair within the paired Genjutsu used with Moment of Clarity will become irrational in their train of thought and actions. The enemy must select an array of techniques he or she wants to use and number them. Depending on how many activations they decide to use they will generate either one, two or three numbers. These represent the techniques they will use.
___S t a g e S i x [ S ]
War [戦争]
Rank: S
P/S. Sense: Sight // Sound
Base Duration: // Upkeep: 1 posts Sorry pal Upkeep 40 Chakra if its S
Description: Can only be used at a battles conclusion after the opponent's mind has been broken by the genjutsu in this style. In their minds vivid images of war will flash for 5 minutes without pause. All the horrors of war will flood their mind as the agony of the slain reverberate in their memories. May sound like an a*****e but this is waaaaaaaaaay too underwhelming for S rank. There's a B-rank Gen that unleashes swathes of dead family members moans and shite which by comparison this comes off as lack luster. Even to a broken brain, heck pretty sure anything at the point of having a broken brain would fuq wit chu. Honestly, I don't have any ideas of what you can with this concept aside from again try to stay away from 'technique like' abilities and focus more on 'altering' abilities.
Molded By The Shadows[影でモールド]
Rank: S :: Training :: Spiritual
Description: Mastery of this style grants the user immunity over the Fear Hazard and negates the fears listed in their profiles. Might be overstepping it here. I think it's a good milestone but Idk what the other mods will think.
The Devil's Right Hand[悪魔の右手]
Rank: S :: Training :: Spiritual
Description: Mastery of this style grants the user a passive genjutsu around themselves. This genjutsu applies a stack of fear every two posts of direct contact, conversation, touch, etc. I'm iffy about this one as to whether or not to consider an alteration or more of a technique. BUT if you want this work do it this way. Make it a [paired] Genjutsu. Have that genjutsu manifest itself as an aura. Touching the aura will thus trigger the paired genjutsu and the opponent starts off with a number of [Fear] dosages equivalent to the rank of the paired Genjutsu. Essentially making you a living trigger for whatever nightmare you've got cooked up. It would be limited because it requires chakra because it is pairing a gen but because of this being the milestone it will not require an upkeep
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2017 5:18 pm
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IN PROGRESS
{ Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''. } The Japanese name will go in between the apostrophes.
[ Yin Release - The Devil's Ambassador]
[Genjutsu is an insidious thing with many utilities. The human mind is a fickle thing and some people respect the boundaries and only use genjutsu as it is necessary. Others however revel in the idea of breaking the mind of their enemies. Battle to Genjutsu enthusiasts and sadists is a game. How long will the opponent stand the onslaught of despair? The Devil's Embassador is truly a style for the twisted individuals of the shinobi world.]
___Relevant Training: Hard Mental
___Notes:
• Style requires a theme. Not using a theme results in penalties. Themes may be as simple as 'Gothic Horror' and 'Killer Carnival', or as terrifying as 'Kittens and Rainbows'.
• Requires Korabo training.
• Techniques involving Fear follow hazard guidelines.
___S t a g e O n e [ E ]
Japanese [ The Contract - Harbringer of Death ]
Rank: X
Description: The user must make a contract seal out of battle, with the Shinigami itself, by permanently deducting an amount of chakra from one's maximum. This contract can be done on any surface, but the object to which the contract is written on must remain on the user's person. As long as it exists and has the blood of the signer on it, the effects are active, and the user must adhere to a strict theme in his or her genjutsu combat. Failure to stick to the theme by performing a genjutsu out of said parameter results in the techniques misfiring. (e.g. no effect, chakra is still consumed) On the other hand, the contract increases the strength (e.g. rank) of the genjutsu used during battle, by one [1]. Techniques only up to the rank of the contract can be altered.
幽霊 [ Ghost ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Techniques in which the user disappears from the enemies sight that are paired with this cause the opponent to go under the effects of Fear, for one [1] post per rank of the corresponding technique used. Additional uses refresh the effect but do not stack. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
それはあなたを見ている [ It Watches ]
Rank: E :: Training, Spiritual
Description: So long as a paired Genjutsu is in effect, the opponent constantly has a feeling that someone is watching them throughout the battle. Must reference at least once per post and engage in this mentality. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
___S t a g e T w o [ D ]
死神 [ Shinigami ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: For every post the opponent is under the hazard [Fear] from any source, the user will gradually take on an applicable body form that resembles the theme to which they are committing. After 3 posts the transformation is complete. If the target looks at the user's complete transformation, one of their 2 offensive activations will misfire. (e.g. chakra consumed, but no effect)
呪われた鎖 [ Chains Of The Damned ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Chained genjutsu of the same theme gain a half a rank in strength following their subsequent usage. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
イノセンス [ Innocence ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Base Duration: // Upkeep: 1/2 rank of paired illusion. (rounded up to near integer)
Description: Once activated the afflicted will not consider kai to be enough to break out of a paired genjutsu and will injure their body in order to break out of even the simplest genjutsu.
___S t a g e T h r e e [ C ]
失われた [ The Lost ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Opponents inflicted with the hazard [Fear] must pay a half rank extra for every dose to kai out of paired illusions. Does not stack with the Contract or the Inception discipline. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
魂のない [ Soulless ]
Rank: X :: Spiritual
Description: Can be paired with a genjutsu to dull a shinobi's ability to sense or detect unnatural Chakra up to the rank of the illusion, for one [1] post per rank of the Genjutsu it is paired with. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
明快さの瞬間 [ Moment Of Clarity ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: For one post, at the users will, all effects and paired genjutsu currently placed upon an opponent are suspended, giving them a sense of confidence and hope. Any action they perform appears to cancel in their following post when reality comes crashing down on them once again, and everything that disappeared returns. Techniques which require the following can instead have Moment of Clarity fill its requirement: "Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts."
___S t a g e F o u r [ B ]
絶望 [ Despair ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted will become desperate as they realize they cannot escape their reality and stops acting rationally for one post. In this post they must use all of their activations. If they are incapable of doing so, their despair will cause an additional dose of [Fear].
死の扉 [ Death's Door ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Paired Genjutsu will create the illusion of death. This will take away a supplemental activation from the enemy in relation to the action taking place. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
最も暗いダンジョン [ Darkest Dungeon ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: Every post of [Fear] gained for the next two [2] of the target's posts accrues another stack of [Fear]. If, during this time, six [6] stacks of [Fear] are present on the target, this technique is allowed to transition itself into a Moment of Clarity.
___S t a g e F i v e [ A ]
マゾヒズム [ Masochism ]
Rank: X :: Complex
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted in their despair will become more prone to inflicting pain on to themselves in order to cope with the harsh reality. If the target performs an offensive action in their next post, the technique(s) used will also be hostile to them.
パラノイア [ Paranoia ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted in their despair, within the paired Genjutsu, will become paranoid of everyone and everything. They will therefore negate all buffs given to them by allies and deny their aid, if possible. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
不合理な [ Irrational ]
Rank: X :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Can only be used after illusions have been in play for two [2] posts. The afflicted in their despair, within the paired Genjutsu, will become irrational in their train of thought and actions. The enemy must select an array of techniques he or she wants to use and number them. Depending on how many activations they decide to use they will generate either one, two or three numbers. These represent the techniques they will use. (i.e. roll a number of die)
___S t a g e S i x [ S ]
戦争 [ War ]
Rank: S :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Can only be used at a battle's conclusion, after the opponent's mind has been broken. In their minds, vivid images of a paired illusion will flash ceaselessly. All the horrors of war will flood their mind as the agony of the slain reverberate in their memories. For each minute placed under this duress (2 posts), the target's Body Rank will be reduced to the next lowest one (Genin minimum), and last for as many posts as there are doses of [Fear]. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
影でモールド [ Molded By The Shadows ]
Rank: S :: Training, Spiritual
Description: The user's ability to play with people's fears has led to a defensive measure against others wanting to do the same to them. While a paired illusion is cast on one's self, the rank of the paired technique will prevent lower dosed [Fear] effects from enacting. E-ranks would count as the 1st dose, D-ranks the 2nd, and so on, capping out at S+'s 7th dose. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
悪魔の右手 [ The Devil's Right Hand ]
Rank: S :: Training, Spiritual
Description: Mastery of this style grants the user a single passive genjutsu around themselves. The paired illusion's chakra cost is permanently deducted from the user's max. This genjutsu applies a stack of [Fear] for every single post of direct contact, two [2] posts of conversation, or three [3] posts of being within three [3] meters of one's self. Techniques with this alteration gain the prefix ''.
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Posted: Wed Oct 25, 2017 8:10 pm
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬
Full Name: Tum
Nickname: {Nicknames or Aliases}
Age: {How old are you?}
Birthdate: {When you were born}
Gender: {Male or Female}
Height: {Inches/Centimeters}
Weight: {Pounds/Kilograms}
Nindo: "{The codes by which you live by. This section might well be left blank at first, and discovered through roleplay.}"
Personality: {Behavior of your character. Spend some time thinking about portions of the personality, and avoid stereotypes such as "dark, broody, only opens up to people they know well". These are common across the board, and doesn't actually explain the way the character acts and reacts. This portion is more for the player to explore who and what their character is, and shouldn't be ignored. Keep in mind your fears, strengths, and weaknesses, and how they effect your personality. A fear of being forgotten, as an example, could reflect in your personality as being gun-ho to always do as you're told, or to always seek attention, to ensure you're never forgotten.}
Village: Kumo
Title: Genin
Rank: Gennin
First Class: Bukijutsu
____Discipline → Samurai
Second Class: Puppeteer
____Discipline → Marionette
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Bloodline: Seiton [ Rust Release ]
Chakra Pool: 350
Stamina Pool: 150
Chakra Element: Fuuton || Doton
Chakra Color: Rust
Chakra Materialization: Rust peeling off skin
Passive Status Increases:
• Strength ► {Total Bonus}
→→ {Where does this come from?}
• Speed ► {Total Bonus}
→→ {Where does this come from?}
• Reflex ► {Total Bonus}
→→ {Where does this come from?}
• Fortitude ► {Total Bonus}
→→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths:
• {Minimum of two}
• {Ex. Close combat, ninjutsu, etc. These are ways of listing just what your character is good at!}
Weaknesses:
• {Minimum of two}
• {Ex. Slower reactions, elemental weakness, etc. What are things in the character's life that they suck at, or need work on?}
Fears:
• {Minimum of two, must be practical.}
• {Ex. Dying alone, bugs, swimming, etc. These fears are important. Fear is a Primary Emotion, meaning it directly effects every emotion we experience at some point. These fears should define a person. An example is a common one: "Fear of Losing a Loved One". While heavily generic, this can influence the personality of the individual to be one who sacrifices themselves for others. They may be willing to stand and fight to make sure others can get to safety. "Fear of Death", however, is not an acceptable fear, for unless a mental disorder is in the character's personality literally everything fears death.}
Reductions:
• {Jutsu Learning reductions, Job Reductions, etc. These must come from somewhere, and cannot be simply added as desired.}
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Personal Attributes:
• Life's Work: Tum has had Lan for most of his life. Upgrading him throughout the years. He never found a need to build a different puppet since Lan was so versatile. With every body rank up, Lan gains two additional mechanisms.
• The Perfect Killing Machine: At the cost of being unable to perform taijutsu, Lan can use bukijutsu techniques up to the same rank as Tum.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero}
AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero} {Additional information in mission board subforum}
Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees
• {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
• {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Job Titles
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
• {Job} || → {Current Title}
Job Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 00
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
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Weapon Type: {Sword, spear, etc.}
Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please}
Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please}
Weapon Size: {What ar ethe dimensions?}
Weapon Location: {Where it is stored}
• {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon. An example is a "longsword" of "English make". However, adding that the pommel screws off and there's a hideout there is a no-no.)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• {List any projectiles/items you've obtained here. Ex. Shuriken x15, Flak jacket, etc.}
• {When you create your profile, you may have any combination of 15 projectiles. Bombs and explosive tags are not projectiles!}
• {Personal objects kept by the character should be listed here. The rule is that if it isn't listed in your inventory, your character does not have it! This includes articles of clothing, gear such as a headband, hair ties, jewelry, etc. }
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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u
Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.}
• Bushi Ken no Jutsu [ Samurai Sabre Technique, ]
• Shunshin no Jutsu [ Body Flicker Technique, ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Kai [ Release ]
{Your first element's name} {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton}
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{Your second element's name} {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton} {If only one element, remove section}
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{Other jutsu type's name} {Bloodline, Kugutsu, Eiseijutsu, etc.} {If none, remove section}
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▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u
{Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}
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{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance}
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s
Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information}
Locked Formless
• {Training Links}
Slots Used
• _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
{Your character's background. Please keep in mind a few things when creating your character's history. All members of this guild start out as D - ranked Genin, or the equivilent. You have taken your classes, you know some basics, you know how to fight on a very simplistic, and small level. This means a history of excessive violence with years of training to be a murderer, or having committed killings or missions, isn't possible. For Tabletop players, you are a level 1 character. For non-tabletop players, you are child with just the bare minimum of skills. A tragic past is fine. A history of some basic training and knowledge might be okay. But severe bonuses? No. Also, please, do not include such things as "graduating top of his/her/they're class". This immediately assumes that everyone of your group is immediately inferior. There are no geniuses, no experts as a genin. Start from the bottom, and work your way up. Explore your history, don't be afraid to ask questions along the way to the Approval Committee if you are struggling!}
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