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Dying From Within

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 5:21 pm


you hurt me again and again
when will this pain ever end
im sick of you walking over me
im sick of being who you want me to be
when will it end oh when will it end

get out of my face stay out of my life
im sick of you waisting my time
you're pushing me to the end of the line
do you really want me to die

im lieing here on my bed
too many thoughts are going thru my head
i can't take this anymore
why aren't you walking out the door
don't you know i don't want to see you anymore

so get out of my face and stay out of my life
im sick of you always waisting my time
you're pushing me to the end of my life
do you really want me to die

don't you know you reap what you sow
but its too late to take back what you've grown
its your fault ive become this way
was this your plan through all those days

now get the ******** out of my face
you're done waisting my time
im pushing you to the end of your line
do you really want to die
PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 1:00 am


Dying From Within
you hurt me again and again
when will this pain ever end
im sick of you walking over me
im sick of being who you want me to be
when will it end oh when will it end

get out of my face stay out of my life
im sick of you waisting my time
you're pushing me to the end of the line
do you really want me to die

im lieing here on my bed
too many thoughts are going thru my head
i can't take this anymore
why aren't you walking out the door
don't you know i don't want to see you anymore

so get out of my face and stay out of my life
im sick of you always waisting my time
you're pushing me to the end of my life
do you really want me to die

don't you know you reap what you sow
but its too late to take back what you've grown
its your fault ive become this way
was this your plan through all those days

now get the ******** out of my face
you're done waisting my time
im pushing you to the end of your line
do you really want to die

It very good emotion_yatta maybe a bit sad for my personal liking but still good.
Does this work as a song by any chance? It sounds like it could work as lyrics.

Beautiful x Mayhem
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 11:52 am


Yes. It is ment to be a song. Its the best song ive written actually. Ive also written poetry but most of it has been lost sadly.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2012 6:48 pm


This is a sad song you have written, but it's very well written.
and Oddly enough I can totally relate at the moment <3

5 out of 5 stars

:3

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2012 8:26 pm


Thanks! If i ever get the chance i want to hear it on the radio. It would probably be on a rock station.
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