Well... anyways... I need new ideas... and honest but nice overall advice/opinions. ouo
THE STORY SO FAR: Meet Tenshi, and normal 17 year old who is kind and simple. He is an all A student, Vice President of the school, and is very athletic. He is all normal by 99.9% What's the 0.1% you may ask? Well, it is his right eye. You see... he was born with a... how do you describe it? OH, yes! A tiger's eye. For years he has to keep his eye hidden from everyone, but himself and his parents, so he wears his eye patch when guest are over, or when he goes outside. Of course the kids at school made fun of him, but it grew on them. In fact... now, they really like him... All but his best friend... Vice President Yui. She hates him, but Tenshi doesn't notice it.
Oh! And I chose not to color it in... because I have no clue how to, and I want
mine to me special! 3nodding
READ IT FROM TOP TO BOTTOM, RIGHT TO LEFT
I am open to ideas! Right now I am stuck on artist block with the story! XD