Not claiming to be perfect by any means.
In my opinion and thoughts...
If you're trying to write a persuasive article, it's not a crime to type incorrectly. However, how many people can take a article full of :
Quote:
5 reasonz y teens r much kooler than adults n 4ever will b
1. We r da txt generation.
2. we own prom nite
3 jst coz we b , yung n krunk;
4. Dont mean we aint gonna get gud gradez n shizz!
5 coz we r bettr, u jus jelly
Seriously?
Of course there's hopefully nothing that bad out there but if there was the unpersuaded people would remain just that, unpersuaded.
A poorly written article on fashion trends the writer wish would not exist
Not only is it poorly written, 'your' mistaken with 'you're', misspelled words, missing commas and places where commas have no business being located; it's also lacking persuasive evidence.
"Oh my gosh! I love your skull tee shirt." Said no one ever.
Really? I speak from experience when I say I've worn skull tees and got compliments.
I don't think many people would bother to agree, its already hard enough for such a opinionated topic. Its execution is so sad. Of course that's my opinion, but after reading the comments, I know I'm not alone...
