Advice on these?? Some new species adopts I made

[shadowattak1]

Allo there,

Soooo.....I've started working on drawing and I'm trying to get better but it seems I fall short on trying to get comments to help me get better. So I'm here to not only seek that help and criticism but also to maybe see about spreading word about an open species I am trying to get started.

Please any help is greatly welcomed. Not just limited to design critiques but also what you think would be a fair price for them or even if the description should be smaller or is missing things.

Also...if you so wish to buy one of my pretties ^.^ I'd be ever delighted if its something you so wish. Please either post your desire to buy one here or on dA using the links in the description. I'm looking for dA points, background art for official profiles, or Gaia coins.
I'm thinking about 300 dA points each (about $3) at least however I put in much more time than this

Thank you and I'll be here to reply as quickly as I can (I'm at work but my replies should be rather quick)

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[delasislas]

shadowattak1

Allo there,

Soooo.....I've started working on drawing and I'm trying to get better but it seems I fall short on trying to get comments to help me get better. So I'm here to not only seek that help and criticism but also to maybe see about spreading word about an open species I am trying to get started.

Please any help is greatly welcomed. Not just limited to design critiques but also what you think would be a fair price for them or even if the description should be smaller or is missing things.

Also...if you so wish to buy one of my pretties ^.^ I'd be ever delighted if its something you so wish. Please either post your desire to buy one here or on dA using the links in the description. I'm looking for dA points, background art for official profiles, or Gaia coins.
I'm thinking about 300 dA points each (about $3) at least however I put in much more time than this

Thank you and I'll be here to reply as quickly as I can (I'm at work but my replies should be rather quick)

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I like them, Cardinal looks the best.
That's about as good as I am with art though.  

[shadowattak1]

Queen Spazzy

Thank you, sorry for the wait in replying.
I agree that I need to do some shading though I really need to figure out how to do it.I mean I can see if its like a layer thing but I don't feel it is so much as something else?  

[shadowattak1]

Queen Spazzy

Ty ^.^ I'm going to see about giving the shading a try with a friend's request for one and see how I can play around with it. I think that will help and add some depth to them. Once I have theirs done I'll come back to these and play with the shading on them.