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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2017 4:41 pm
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PENDING
In this profile, these are the following problems that NEED to be fixed: >Gaia/Tera isn't the name for earth and it should be changed >Xeno-Evolutionary Mutant needs approval, since we don't have an idea of what it is > No image >Stripes? Are scars? I don't understand >Elaborate on your personality >He fears being a homosexual or Homosexuals in general, either way, please elaborate on it > 'To keep his mind and attitude on God', what go does he praise? In this universe, there are Kaioshin, Quadrant Kai, Guardians, Hakaioshin, The king that seperates the good and bad souls, please elborate >Affiliation doesn't make much sense, since there is no established alignment for the heroic faction, as well there seems to be no connection to your character and justice >You, no where in your profile explain what Solider is >Your strengths are just work outs, no actual strengths to your character, please tell us the advantages your character has. >Your weaknesses look more like dislikes, and mortality is kind of not a weakness, because everyone is mortal excluding Kaioshin >Your stats are a number base, to compare to others, as well as you character's power is much lower than all of the other combatants that are within this guild >Please explain Scholastic Wrestling >Ki warrior isn't a type of fighting, please give admin a comparrison of how often you use Ki rather than Physical Attacks >Your race isn't under the canon Dragon ball demograph, please explain it as well as the Unique Race Trait, for it seems like you are only slightly above normal human power compared to them >Your Skills, are again mostly work outs and techniques we haven't seen, one includes being Scary Fast, which isn't really a technique unless you create a custom for it and such >You haven't made a custom for your transformation, or explained what it actually is >You don't have a bio really, it's less than a sentence and explains nothing >Due to that, we know nothing of your friends and your person's actual personality/abilities >Don't put the date, for we don't use the Gregorian Calender, we use the Dragon Historic Age marks
In this Profile, these are the following problems that should be fixed: >Add an actual theme >Go a bit more indepth with your likes and dislikes >Change the Fear, it might be a bit too offensive to some >Maybe Broaden your build, instead of using the terms, and be a bit more descriptive >Make some custom techniques
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killer-wolf-kun Vice Captain
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