I goofed (Nightmare manor fixing)

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Welcome to nightmare manor, a wayward home for misunderstood, mistreated foals,stallions and mares of all kinds, here you enter in to the home of the Alicorn of nightmares, she welcomes you in to her home among the grove deep within a forest hidden from the mortals of ever change. Here you are welcome to make yourself at home, she has rooms for those who wish to stay by her side but also welcomes those who join her heard to make homes within the forest and create a community of misfits along side her.

WARNING WARNING WARNING
This heard contains mutants of all kinds as well as ponies with designs that are not meant for the faint of heart, if you have a phobia please take caution while entering and viewing the content within, the backstory of some of theses characters can be dark and unsettling. Enter at your own risk!!  

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Eerie Misfits, Mad scientist experiments and children of the night She calls to you all to join her ranks and help fight against the evil in the world. To you the nightmares she gives you are sweet dreams, but to those who are evil she causes discord and terror in their dreams. An Alicorn appears to you in your nightmares during the cycle of night. A great pale lady porcelain fur, stitches cover every joint, bone white hair and eyes like wisp in the night. The pale lady stares down at you eyes glowing a vibrant icy blue. You have been tormented in your lifetime, it turned you to the darker side of life and she now opens her wings to you. The pale Lady beckons, you follow the black roses thorn bush to her home deep within forest of [name here]. You see a tail of thorny vines paving a path as you reach the forest. You follow them the forest gets darker, shadows seemingly move and you see evil eyes glowing within, they follow you but disappear into the darkness as your gaze meets theirs. As you find it harder to continue the darkness fades, before you a large mansion old.Victorian styled, spots of blue paint flaked off over the years weren't nearly enough to make it look dreary. Roses bushes border the property and paving the pathway of stones leading to an ornate gate blocking your way; Or so it appears.

Checking the gate it seems to be locked, but as you take a closer look at the chains they unravel slipping to the cobblestone, the gates swing open eerily. Before you now stands the Alicorn you saw in your dreams. The pale Lady regards you with frost blue eyes her long wavy white hair sways in the wind. The Lady offers you welcoming smile "You came, that makes me happy, will you stay?” she asks as she wraps a wing around you welcoming you inside “If you choose to stay I can offer protection and a home and family and you are free to come and go as you choose.” she takes you inside, and you notice now much more elegant it is within. Dated perhaps with furniture all in Gothic Victorian style but lovely none the less. The Pale lady sits you down and offers you tea “You can sign here to become apart of my herd, you gain some special items or even abilities, though temporary, as you climb the ranks or you can leave now if you choose.” she said sitting down across from you eating something unidentifiable it looks a bit like jerky. "Now make your choice little lamb." Will you sign and stay with the heard or leave? Never to return or find this place again.  

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