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[cherrish_girl]

one word

SUPERB  

[BlackBloodJin]

whee ok I'll post my If I Could Change the Past poem. If I can find it.....  

[[KookieMunzta]]

Angel Muerto

yea Kookie doesn't hold back... she's brutal wink

dramallama lol

 

[BlackBloodJin]

If I Could Change The Past

If I could change the past it would
not only be my own.
But the world around me.
The things I would change would
be for the better.

If I could change the past there
would be no killing, no hate, no killing.
No discrimination of one color, all
would be the color of love and
understanding.

But, the fact is, I cannot change that
has been done before my time.
Without war, hate, or dictation,
there would be no history.

No Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.,
or no war ever.
If I could change the past everyone
would love.
But I am not in the past.
Only in the future.

 

[Undeciria]

i like it!  

[BlackBloodJin]

thanks  

[Angel Muerto]

that was pretty good Jin... i like it.  

[BlackBloodJin]

Thanks (again)  

[BlackBloodJin]

Any one have any thing about writing they wanna post? Maybe some more poetry. I can write some for you guys if you like.  

[Angel Muerto]

write something about me. that would be cool.  

[BlackBloodJin]

Ok, I'll see if I can post it if I'm done later today.  

[Angel Muerto]

alright. that'd be cool.  

[bluegray]

your poetry does what poetry should...it makes the unexplainable beautiful. job well done.