Okay, I am writing an alternate Kingdom Hearts fanfiction, using various anime, manga, and some books instead of Disney. I don't really know how to judge my own work, so what I really want is an opinion.
The fic can be found here.
Be warned, if you don't like the idea of pretty much every single character being replaced, then you might not want to click.
Also, I would love to hear any and all ideas involving plot devices, as I am somewhat stumped.
Please let me know what you think, it doesn't really matter to me by what means.
