Waiting -Poem

[Non Timebo Mala]

I don't usually write poetry but I thought this one turned out very well.

Do you feel what I have felt?
Though it is unconditional
It has remained to myself

Impossible to explain
Yet an emotion of infinite names
And disguise by the screen of secrecy

Until you clear the haze
I will sit from afar and admire its budding
For which is a beautiful sight

To all the years of kindness
A beautiful flower has blossomed
Into this feeling of absolute love
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36793674/

Comments and critique's appresiated and loved.  

[Kamahi]

Awww thats so sweet whee It reminds me of my ex.... heart  

[18luck]

aww^^ cute poem!  

[MissJennaGan]

Wow, that is beautious

I love the way you hold out on using the word you wanted until the end

Though I think it is convayed very well what you meant

Very Good!!! 3nodding  

[Airyonah]

Wow. that's really good. My first poem turned out really badly. But I'd flip some things so it stuck to the rhyming scheme. Great poem! biggrin