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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:43 pm

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His name is Kye and yes he is thinking about a blueberry muffin and yes he is a guy smile

I sketched it then scanned it and used Ulead PhotoImpact to color it. Not a lot of shading I know but I got lazy. It happens a lot xd

Critique however you feel necessary smile

Edit: I totally screwed up on the eyes!!!! gonk

Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 2:53 pm

i actually think it's pretty good .. if you had done more shading it would've been awesome! all you really have to do is clean up your lines they're too wiggly and his belly could've stuck out a little bit more .. nd about the shading nd higlighting .. you should include a third color to help blend them in but good job i like it .. mmm muffin

oh ps. to make him look like he's thinking you should've maade him have a blank stare looking more to his right or given him a "hungry" look don't know if that makes sense but hopefully it does lol Good luck!

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CheckoNeko

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Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:48 pm

thank you blaugh

Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:31 am

What the person above said was good. 3nodding Also for the eyes, you could just make him look up a little more to make it look like he's thinkin'. Also, his hair is really... stiff. Like your lines aren't flowing as much as...ummmm... sticking (?) that way. Like you put too much effort into the hair or something, mostly the back. That's what I think. You shouldn't think too much with the hair, just get the general shape and let your hand create lines. So what if the lines don't connect all the time; that's what the eraser's for. Oh. And the undo button. wink Can't forget that one. blaugh Hahahaha! Other than these problems and the ones mentioned previously (either by you or that other person) it looks good (even without the nose rofl ).