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 Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2008 9:56 pm
 went ballistics... I think.
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 1:49 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 3:59 pm
Calm down, it's not that bad. In fact, it's really good. 'Cept, the face kinda bugs me. Sorry. It's just the nose and the mouth. Honestly. For the nose, it curves inward like when you throw a ball and it kinda just curves downward like that. That's kinda what the nose looks like since it doesn't really have a dynamic slope-y-ness. Does that make any sense? Actually, I know some people have noses that kinda just curve in like that (hook noses they're called I think) but it just looked kind of odd to me. I could be wrong. Who knows? I may be totally psychotic. Although, I think I'm sane enough though with thinking the mouth is very strange. Sorry again. It looks like the one on your last picture and with the way it's drawn and shaded and everything (great job on shading by the way) it kind of looks like she's got some chew in her bottom lip (like Chewing Tobacco). It's rather distracting. Perhaps have darker shading closer to the underneath of the bottom lip? sweatdrop I dunno. You're really great with bodies though if that helps make you feel better about this picture. Trust me, there are plenty of worse disasters. Actually, this really isn't a disaster, so you should be even happier. Well, Good Job! Oh! And with the nose, I think if you lift that left nostril and moved it to the left a little more it won't look like her nose is curved a weird way. blaugh Hope this helped. mrgreen
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