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 Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 1:48 am
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 9:57 am
Anyone? Please? I'm a beginner at this, and I wanna try to improve...
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:14 am
1.) Be patient for a reply. It takes time to get a reply or critique, especially if people spend time to critique it. So no bumping until you get to the second page.
2.) Do not put a link to your entire gallery. Pick a few (1-3) pictures that you consider your best, or whatever, and have us critique those. It makes it much easier, and you'll receive better critiques.
So please change your main post.
Thanks,
Okeyday
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:33 pm
The first two ones you posted: they proportions are a little off (short legs, skinny arms, long torsos{especially in the second panel of the second posted picture thing}), although it's difficult to see the first one. The flower is a little off; I'm sorry, but I don't think I'll be able to help you correct it as flowers aren't my forte. And I really like the third picture thing. It's cute. It looks like the strangely pleasing style my sister used to do (when she used to draw, albeit not often). They're all very cute. Oh! One more thing, the wings on the people embracing in the second posted picture thing, are those wings? I couldn't really tell. They look a little too geometrical. If they are then perhaps some practice with that type of wing shape? Either way, yes you have a very cute style. Continue to draw. I hope this helped a little. Or more. rofl Good Luck! And Have Fun! blaugh
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