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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 5:37 am


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this is probably one of my best drawings but theres something off
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:44 am


ok so heres what i see in the drawings:

for the first on the chins look kinda weird. idk how to explain it. also the guys left sholder [our right] is smaller then the outher shoulder. hmmm lets see what else :] i think thats it. its realli good and i could never do hands like that mrgreen

for the second one, the dogs legs look to short for the body. also, unlike cats, dogs dont have retractable claws and if they do, they r only particially so thats something u can add. also, the tail looks like its attacked to the back leg [probably cause i cant see the linde but idk] so theres something else. plus, the nose looks kinda big.
everything else looks good. finally someone else drawing dogs on here....im not the only one mrgreen

phew, last one. ok...the headphone thing looks way to big for the head to start off. plus, the head looks to small for the neck. also, the arms look kinda skinny. thats all see. good job biggrin

wow that was my longest help message thing...i feel like Tarff right now mrgreen

oxellebellxo


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:45 am


and now that i look at it, it looks to small to be long :]
PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 9:39 am


Just for the record, the weather today is slightly sarcastic with a good chance of...

Hm, the only thing I can mention that oxellebellxo hasn't already is that the middle one's head in the first drawing looks like it's at a bit of an odd angle. But I think the thing that's messing it up is one of the eyes. The eye on the viewer's right looks a little too high up. But other than that, it's great. *thumbs up*

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ItsTheBunbunasaurus


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 10:40 am


The dogs neck seems a bit to short and as it looks like a retriever then it should hav a slight mane.
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