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 Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:23 pm
Hey guys. Over the years I have been doing some Caribbean inspired pieces some of which were for my art class smile I love the local architecture lol Anyway I have a few up on deviant art and I would really appreciate you telling me what you think of them here. I hope to add some more soon. Thank you very much for your time smile Here's the link:- http://shazanna.deviantart.com/
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 10:43 pm
You did a wonderful job on all! Especially with the colors. They're absolutely wonderful. I don't do landscapes or anything so it seems even more amazing. I really like the Barbados one. blaugh That's my favorite. The Rum Shop kinda bothered me because the building was kinda crooked. Well, not really crooked as set at a different angle from the paper itself, so it bothered me. I really am insane; I go nuts about little things. But WOW those colors look great and the textures! Just WOW! eek For the Chatel House, it may have been the yellow but, it looks kinda 2D. It's still amazing, don't get me wrong. It just didn't have as much dimensional value as the others, just so you know for the future. rofl You're new to this guild right? Or you changed your avi? I'm totally evil when it comes to critiquing. But I really only do it to help, so please don't hate me. *puppy dog eyes* Anyway, wonderful job with the pens and paints!
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 8:59 am
omg ur like amazingggg eek i cant do landscapes for anything. trust me on that my trees look so weird its like scarey. my favorite is the beach scene one. i love all the textures and the way the water looks is great mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:04 pm
Thank you guys very much!!! smile *blush* lol yeah i'm kinda new to the guild. This is probably my 2nd topic thing lol Barbados one seems to be my fave too. Its the first time i ever painted a waterscape. I so agree with your comments. The chattel house is sooo 2D!!! LOL At the time I didnt know how to make shadows without taking away the brightness of the pieces epecially using acrylics. I usually use watercolours for houses. To Tariff dont worry I wont hate u biggrin lol i appreciate any help i can get especially when it comes to the hole manga thing which I suck at ! lol To oxellebellxo, dont worry at all! i'm sure you draw great! Practice makes perfect smile Plus the pen and ink technique is so helpful when you're feeling lazy. biggrin its quite handy for detailing smile thank you for taking time to critique smile
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:14 pm
shaz_180906 Thank you guys very much!!! smile *blush* lol yeah i'm kinda new to the guild. This is probably my 2nd topic thing lol Barbados one seems to be my fave too. Its the first time i ever painted a waterscape. I so agree with your comments. The chattel house is sooo 2D!!! LOL At the time I didnt know how to make shadows without taking away the brightness of the pieces epecially using acrylics. I usually use watercolours for houses. To Tariff dont worry I wont hate u biggrin lol i appreciate any help i can get especially when it comes to the hole manga thing which I suck at ! lol To oxellebellxo, dont worry at all! i'm sure you draw great! Practice makes perfect smile Plus the pen and ink technique is so helpful when you're feeling lazy. biggrin its quite handy for detailing smile thank you for taking time to critique smile
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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 6:23 pm
it did thank you smile I looked at the piece called Rum Shop again and I realised why the building looked bent biggrin I had to cut of the edges when I was taking the photo of it lol! i couldn't get it straight when I was using the camera!! lol Sometimes those angle things bug me too biggrin lol thanks biggrin it did help a lot biggrin
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