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Fix This :<

Sonnenblume

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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 6:00 pm

I already know the right shin needs to be curved or something (my right).

I'm not happy with it yet.
And Keely isn't here to liter it with red marks D:

Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 6:08 pm

Ok now that I can look at it while I post.

Are the eyes too small? Or badly tilted? Tehy look weird too.
The ear is too low.
OMG MY HANDS LOOK DECENT 4laugh 4laugh
The right side (my right), should it tuck in more? And meet the boob, not the arm?
The right ankle is too small, the left too big.
The feet don't look the right size either, but I don't really know how to draw them at that angle..

And the waist seemed like a good idea at first, but I don't like that style.
So I'll redo it smoother 3nodding

What else ya got?

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SWFTWLF

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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:51 pm

Tiny head is tiny? The neck also has a weird curve, same with the body parts.

You got most the other stuff.

Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 9:44 pm

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Akela says the right side needs more booty.

LOLI DIDN'T RESIZE IT. NOT SORRY.

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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 12:12 am

Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 12:53 am

Desu?

And she's supposed to be leaning forward, like shoulders forward booty bent back.. but it came out a bit awkward :<

ALSO YOU ARE KIDDING NO ONE KALIEA. Sneaking peaks. Tsktsk.

Here it is done:
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/228/e/0/Kaliea_007_by_DontStopLying.jpg
http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs32/f/2008/228/f/a/Kaliea_007_pt__2_by_DontStopLying.jpg

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