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 Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:49 am
Please tell me how to get better. D: (I can't color it cause I don't have photoshop yet.... D smile anyways Please critique this work. (my most decent work in a while D: I can seem to draw anything decent just chibis D: ) Please tell me what you think. a little info: Those 2 are the characters of 2 of my friends in angels online (check ao.igg.com for more details) they're also part of gaia so check them out the guy ( Kitaro ) and the girl ( Sachiko) WAHAHAHA! I'm gonna spam them. Joke xp SORRY KITARO!!!!!!! (I had a fight with him D: NUUUUUU )
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:51 am
Please tell me what you think. O.O *puppy dog eyes*I rrrreeeeeaaaaalllllyyyy want to improve
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:53 am
no one's saying anything... and I'm scared this topic might die.. must keep it alive! scream <-- ATTACK!
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:56 am
Last post for now.... hope one of you guys critique it! ^_^ rofl <---- this is me rolling away
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 3:57 am
Still nothing XD .... *fading away.....*
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 5:14 am
The only problems I see are the female's bent leg, looks a bit short, and the male's hand which is holding the sword.
But overall I'd say it looks really good and if that's your idea of decent, I'd wonder what your idea of great is o_o;
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:35 am
Majin Paul The only problems I see are the female's bent leg, looks a bit short, and the male's hand which is holding the sword. But overall I'd say it looks really good and if that's your idea of decent, I'd wonder what your idea of great is o_o; XD first of all. THANK YOU!! for being the first person to post. I kinda noticed the uhhh 'out of proportion' areas XD but I was so happy to finish it (i sat for 2 hours none stop D: ) so i didn't bother correct it. I'll try to make a better one next time. (>.< have to keep the proportions in mind) hopefully, next time, i'll make a 'great' picture xd Again. THANK YOU!!!! 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 7:58 am
xD No prob.
But once you get the problems I mentioned looked at, it should look pretty great. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:20 am
I agree. The arm holding the sword is a bit flattened because of the foreshortening affect. Maybe if you shorten the length of the amount of forearm being shown (if you want the arm to appear raised) and make the hand a little bigger, show more of the knuckles and flats of the fingers...
You really want to show that the fingers are wrapping 'around' the sword handle. Also, maybe even out the shield shape and add some shadow to give it more volume.
One thing I love, though, is the line you used to shape the girls cheek (the one furthest away from the viewer). Its beautiful!
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Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 10:24 am
Oh yeah, also, the person on the left seems like his head is turning to the right (his right) at an angle. To me, with this in mind, his head seems a little...eh...thinner than it should be....I imaging we should be seeing more of the rounded back of his head...
sorry...forgot to mention that...
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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 2:14 am
ChrisJS I agree. The arm holding the sword is a bit flattened because of the foreshortening affect. Maybe if you shorten the length of the amount of forearm being shown (if you want the arm to appear raised) and make the hand a little bigger, show more of the knuckles and flats of the fingers... You really want to show that the fingers are wrapping 'around' the sword handle. Also, maybe even out the shield shape and add some shadow to give it more volume. One thing I love, though, is the line you used to shape the girls cheek (the one furthest away from the viewer). Its beautiful! ChrisJS Oh yeah, also, the person on the left seems like his head is turning to the right (his right) at an angle. To me, with this in mind, his head seems a little...eh...thinner than it should be....I imaging we should be seeing more of the rounded back of his head... sorry...forgot to mention that... Thank you! 3nodding I see more knuckles to make the wrapping around effect of the hand to the sword's handel more uh..'see - able' xd and shape to the shield. and the head of kitaro. THANK CHU!!!! I should made a better version. O.O >>>>> (runs to the drawing board :3 ) (Is having a REALLY HUGE artist block currently D: ) Wish me luck! ------> ATTACK!! scream <-- the face of working seriously. O.o no.. SERIOUSLY
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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:06 am
This is a VERY slow moving forum Kyo so please don't bump/spam unless your thread has fallen off the front page (which can take days).
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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 2:45 pm
btw Kyo...I'm not sure if you are going to edit this one or simply start on another work...but if you update this one or do another version I would love to see it. 3nodding if you wanted...
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:43 am
Sotalean This is a VERY slow moving forum Kyo so please don't bump/spam unless your thread has fallen off the front page (which can take days). Sorry about that. crying I didn't mean to spam though. ChrisJS btw Kyo...I'm not sure if you are going to edit this one or simply start on another work...but if you update this one or do another version I would love to see it. 3nodding if you wanted... sure! I'd show you if ever i make a new one. (i might take a while though D: cause of my stupid block crying I'll still show you guys anyway (I might post it here too. xd ))
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