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 Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 4:20 pm
Hi everyone ^ㅂ^~
On September 7th, a really good friend of mine is having her birthday. So I drew her a picture for it ;w;~ I worked very hard on it, and LOVE the outcome of all thatr hard work. Still, I want some critiques so I can still improve.
http://onehappystar.deviantart.com/art/Happy-Birthday-RainCookie-D-96934408
Please critique as harsh as you like<3 On the anatomy, the coloring, anything.
I'm trying to get better at CGing, since I feel the need to improve. :>
A friend told me to improve, I should try different styles of drawing and coloring and what-not. I tried to draw differently than I do, and color differently, but not sure if it's working out well... So yeah, end of my long and pointless description. 8D
<3
 Kenny McCormick<3
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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:38 pm
Actually I really like it. Its cute! The coloring and blending is really nice! and I like the hands too!
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 2:24 am
It really nice! 3nodding I like how you colored it. (i can never color like that D: )
If you really work hard on something it is bound to turn in to something good so.. never give up!!! and keep trying!! and you're wrong, it(your drawing) is working out well (in my opinion anyway)
Say happy birthday to your friend for me! ^^ (i'll say it anyway) Happy Birthday RainCookie !!!
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 6:21 am
Aww...pretty.^^ Let's hope she likes it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 6:02 pm
awww its so cute 4laugh i bet ur friend will really like it!!! tell her i said happy b-dayy mrgreen
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 6:19 pm
ChrisJS Actually I really like it. Its cute! The coloring and blending is really nice! and I like the hands too!
The hands? D'aww thanks : D I usually try my best on the hands, they seem to the be a big part of anatomy. xDKyokuran It really nice! 3nodding I like how you colored it. (i can never color like that D: ) If you really work hard on something it is bound to turn in to something good so.. never give up!!! and keep trying!! and you're wrong, it(your drawing) is working out well (in my opinion anyway) Say happy birthday to your friend for me! ^^ (i'll say it anyway) Happy Birthday RainCookie !!!
I actually used this coloring style because I saw my friend's Speed CG video, and thought I should try it. xD;; It's just the use of the brush tool, the airbrush tool, and the smugde/blur tool. 8D
Thank you so much!<3 C: I'll inform her that you said that~ZackyP Aww...pretty.^^ Let's hope she likes it. oxellebellxo awww its so cute 4laugh i bet ur friend will really like it!!! tell her i said happy b-dayy mrgreen
Thanks ;ㅂ;
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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 2:06 am
HyperTomboy Kyokuran It really nice! 3nodding I like how you colored it. (i can never color like that D: ) If you really work hard on something it is bound to turn in to something good so.. never give up!!! and keep trying!! and you're wrong, it(your drawing) is working out well (in my opinion anyway) Say happy birthday to your friend for me! ^^ (i'll say it anyway) Happy Birthday RainCookie !!!
I actually used this coloring style because I saw my friend's Speed CG video, and thought I should try it. xD;; It's just the use of the brush tool, the airbrush tool, and the smugde/blur tool. 8D
Thank you so much!<3 C: I'll inform her that you said that~speed CG!! O.O I hope you make more wonderful works! I'll be waiting for them :3 <-- is NOT a stalker XD Thanks for passing the message!
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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 6:09 pm
I love your colouring style. :3
Now, to critique, because I'm good at it. xD
The only problem I see is that the arms are a little too short and thin, otherwise, it's really good.
You did a wonderful job on shading and on the background.
Also, though that's not something really major or really important: the bag's...strap?* seems a little too stiff in my opinion; but I really don't know how you could fix that.
The hands are wonderful, by the way.
*English is not my mother language, please bear with me. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:12 am
Luna Amatista I love your colouring style. :3
Now, to critique, because I'm good at it. xD
The only problem I see is that the arms are a little too short and thin, otherwise, it's really good.
You did a wonderful job on shading and on the background.
Also, though that's not something really major or really important: the bag's...strap?* seems a little too stiff in my opinion; but I really don't know how you could fix that.
The hands are wonderful, by the way.
*English is not my mother language, please bear with me. sweatdrop
Thank you!<3
Also, thank you for the wonderful critique.<3 C:
:00 Now that I take a second look, the arms do seemed a little short xD; Thanks for telling me!
The shading is wonderful? ;ㅂ; You don't know how happy that makes me<3 The background as well? I'm not very good with backgrounds, so I was very proud of how I did the sky and etc. things in the background<3 Thanks again ;w;~
:00 Hmm, really? Well, next time I draw I'll try and make it.. not so stiff 8D LOL.
The hands? Ohh thank you ;w;~<3
Nah, your English is very good! :'DKyokuran speed CG!! O.O I hope you make more wonderful works! I'll be waiting for them :3 <-- is NOT a stalker XD Thanks for passing the message!
Aww, thank you ;w; I'll try<3
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:46 pm
OMG! It's sooo cute! I really love the lollipop! heart xD
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