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 Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 11:24 am
This is one of my recent creations. It isn't the finished product, but its the sketch.
I did finish this, but I was satified with how it looked. You guys got any suggestions.
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 2:21 pm
The idea of this picture is very cute. There are, however, a few things that could be worked on. sweatdrop
Hand placement/form/size:
http://auroracarina-chan.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-Hands-while-kissing-52195117
Profile:
http://touzoku-joou.deviantart.com/art/Tutorial-profile-views-64605127
http://luna-jms.deviantart.com/art/Face-tutorial-50800480
Expression and neck (I know the one on the right is surprised (?) but the one on the left looks... well, I don't really know confused ):
http://deamond89.deviantart.com/art/Dea-s-ultimate-Kiss-tutorial-55870900
The kiss:
http://auroracarina-chan.deviantart.com/art/kiss-tutorial-24271037
Sorry I couldn't actually help here myself, but I don't have time. But this picture's concept is great, and you have great potential. I hope I helped if even a little. mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 4:30 pm
It does help me some. It took me a week to draw this mostly because I got so irritated at it and gave up for hours on end. I eventually gave up on editing and just finished it. It was really my first attempt at a kiss.
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Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 5:24 pm
I'm glad. And for your first time, I have to say pretty good job. At least they look like they're kissing. I don't even attempt kissing scenes 'cause when I try to make one, usually someone ends up with a big head and they look very disconnected and out of place. To sum it up, my kissing scenes look wrong. rofl Hahahahaha Good luck.
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