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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 11:31 am



Sat. Oct 11: Wrote Bridge and chorus
Sun. Oct 12: Wrote first verse, started on second one


So I'm writing this song for creative writing/myself. And I'm using this in case I lose the papers.


First verse:
Almost eleven months we spent away
And I'll never forget of that day
I called you up
And you told me about Jessica


Second verse:
You're cold as ice but you're my hottest flame
(And I know we'd never be the same)
(It hurts and you're the one to blame)
...




Chorus:
I could cry
But it wouldn't bring you back
Wouldn't turn back time
Or take back what you did with her
I could wish
Wish with all my heart
Wish on the first bright star and hope for you to come back to me
But you won't and we can't ever be the same
So I'll be crying


Third verse:
...

Bridge:
And we're sitting in the car
Priscilla's holding my hand
And I try to talk to her
To make her understand
She says to me "It seems like you loved him more than her liked you."
And it seems to me like that could be true


Chorus:
I could cry
But it wouldn't bring you back
Wouldn't turn back time
Or take back what you did with her
I could wish
Wish with all my heart
Wish on the first bright star and hope for you to come back to me
But you won't and we can't ever be the same

So I could cry
But it wouldn't bring you back
Wouldn't turn back time
Or take back what you did with Jessica


PostPosted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:40 pm


Hm, not bad, but it seems kinda long.

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