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Fluffy Akuma

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Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 4:02 pm

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Pure boredom. Wanted something different having to do with the grim reaper, but not quite Death himself. A bit on the hitman side, eh?
because he is a skeleton, I tried to get the suit to fit his figure a bit.

I want critique on the gun(And everything else)! O:
It was just a quick sketch that damned thing, but still.

Redlines+Critique please!

Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:48 pm

Anatomy seems to be otherwise good, exept that his right hand is too small and arm too long. Measure the arm and compare it to the other arm to see it.
The head is great, right size in everywhere and eyes and all parts in right places. Allso the suit is well done with nice details and folds. I like his right arms folds especially. 3nodding

Keigan

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Fluffy Akuma

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Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:16 pm

Keigan

Anatomy seems to be otherwise good, exept that his right hand is too small and arm too long. Measure the arm and compare it to the other arm to see it.
The head is great, right size in everywhere and eyes and all parts in right places. Allso the suit is well done with nice details and folds. I like his right arms folds especially. 3nodding

Thanks. And don't you mean left hand to small; arm too long, instead of right? XD
Yeah, I would fix the drawing, but one of my friends came over and he stole it from me. D: He likes skeleton related things. -.-

Posted: Sat Nov 22, 2008 2:14 am

Fluffy Akuma

Keigan

Anatomy seems to be otherwise good, exept that his right hand is too small and arm too long. Measure the arm and compare it to the other arm to see it.
The head is great, right size in everywhere and eyes and all parts in right places. Allso the suit is well done with nice details and folds. I like his right arms folds especially. 3nodding

Thanks. And don't you mean left hand to small; arm too long, instead of right? XD
Yeah, I would fix the drawing, but one of my friends came over and he stole it from me. D: He likes skeleton related things. -.-

Nothing today is pure. crying Maybe. That's what I think. xd
Every art has its influence.

Still, great idea you have there. I like it. He looks stiff though.