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 Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 10:44 pm
Well Hi there, I havent posted anything on here for a long time, so I am hoping that I have improved somewhat from my last post. Well I am posting my two Necrophiliac characters. I am using them for a story that I am writing and I wanted some critque on them. So any Critique at all would be appreciated~ 
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:46 am
either the eyes are too far down, or the top half of the head is a little too big for the guy on the right (our left). other than that, great job, its got character lol biggrin
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 7:09 am
Ah, okay Ill try and fix that~
And thank you <3
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Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:36 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 2:07 am
"necrophiliac"? just... no.
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 1:02 pm
I really like your style of drawing. biggrin
Hmm, both of the character's heads seem a tad large, and the person on our left, his arm is a bit thin I think (but that might just be your style :O ).
Do love it though, keep up the good work!
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Posted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 2:42 pm
Pandaria I really like your style of drawing. biggrin
Hmm, both of the character's heads seem a tad large, and the person on our left, his arm is a bit thin I think (but that might just be your style :O ).
Do love it though, keep up the good work! i was thinking the same thing bout his arm, but seeing thats its called necrophiliac and their in bandages, its probably bone or decayed/decaying flesh.
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 9:59 am
Pandaria I really like your style of drawing. biggrin
Hmm, both of the character's heads seem a tad large, and the person on our left, his arm is a bit thin I think (but that might just be your style :O ).
Do love it though, keep up the good work! ^^ Aww thank you. I have a hard time judging weather or not their heads ar too big >.> So I shall work on that. And Yes, I do make their arms too thin... I think it is my style. But again thank you and I shall <33
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:01 am
Nagoshi Kun Pandaria I really like your style of drawing. biggrin
Hmm, both of the character's heads seem a tad large, and the person on our left, his arm is a bit thin I think (but that might just be your style :O ).
Do love it though, keep up the good work! i was thinking the same thing bout his arm, but seeing thats its called necrophiliac and their in bandages, its probably bone or decayed/decaying flesh. That is a good idea there. never thought of it like that. And anyways do you know how to make the arms not too skinny? I seem to tend to do that on all my drawings. I think it may be my style but I would like to try and make them not thin <3
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 9:11 am
try practicing different sizes and try to draw arms a lot. thats what i do when i want to learn something.
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Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:23 am
Well the head are a tad too large.
.....
Soooo.
You are awair what the word "Necrophilia" means?
(Necrophilia, also called thanatophilia and necrolagnia, is the sexual attraction to corpses)
But erm.
If that's what you're going for then yah.
Just felt the need too point it out.
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 6:05 am
Wait, If there both corpse's.
Then wouldnt they be thin anyway from losing bodily fluid from the atrophy process of dieing...
-Atrophy: A wasting away of an organ or part.
The head size in your style, for me it needs.
To perhaps bring the hair down a bit, But keeping the skull around it.
Like above the males left eye [Me Looking At View]
The parting in the hair would be where the 'skull' would end i believe.
Probs for the picture though it makes Me green...
With envy, Because i admire you line art rofl
Think that your putting layers onto the character.
Bone, Muscle, Skin, Cloths, Hair.
Start with simple circles and squares yes. but learning about the skeleton frame etc can give you feeling that 'All Our' pictures are alive..
Fantasy works best in my view - If the anatomy is rite.
You not going to fear a villian/Monster that has a oversized leg through the artists fault.
Well big eyes are always been loved... So big heads might be loved too!
Come to the 'Draw The Avatar Above You' Thread and try some out then..
Go on.. Go on 3nodding Go on xp
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:35 am
klikkhaus Well the head are a tad too large.
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Soooo.
You are awair what the word "Necrophilia" means?
(Necrophilia, also called thanatophilia and necrolagnia, is the sexual attraction to corpses)
But erm.
If that's what you're going for then yah.
Just felt the need too point it out. Oh yes I do know what it means. I just wanted to create a few characters that are Nercophiliacs. I dunno... But anyways thank you for the advice.
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 8:38 am
Shinji_Shingetsu Wait, If there both corpse's.
Then wouldnt they be thin anyway from losing bodily fluid from the atrophy process of dieing...
-Atrophy: A wasting away of an organ or part.
The head size in your style, for me it needs.
To perhaps bring the hair down a bit, But keeping the skull around it.
Like above the males left eye [Me Looking At View]
The parting in the hair would be where the 'skull' would end i believe.
Probs for the picture though it makes Me green...
With envy, Because i admire you line art rofl
Think that your putting layers onto the character.
Bone, Muscle, Skin, Cloths, Hair.
Start with simple circles and squares yes. but learning about the skeleton frame etc can give you feeling that 'All Our' pictures are alive..
Fantasy works best in my view - If the anatomy is rite.
You not going to fear a villian/Monster that has a oversized leg through the artists fault.
Well big eyes are always been loved... So big heads might be loved too!
Come to the 'Draw The Avatar Above You' Thread and try some out then..
Go on.. Go on 3nodding Go on xp Aww, well thank you~ I shall try to work on learning about anatomy and what not, I always have a hard time with that. And I will work on bringing the hairline down or moving the eyes up. And I think I will have to pay that little thread a visit xD
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Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 12:33 pm
Kisa Tsuki klikkhaus Well the head are a tad too large.
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Soooo.
You are awair what the word "Necrophilia" means?
(Necrophilia, also called thanatophilia and necrolagnia, is the sexual attraction to corpses)
But erm.
If that's what you're going for then yah.
Just felt the need too point it out. Oh yes I do know what it means. I just wanted to create a few characters that are Nercophiliacs. I dunno... But anyways thank you for the advice.
:]
I just felt I should point it out, the last time I saw someone calling thier character a necrophiliac, they thought it meant someone cabable of controlling the dead.
But kudos.
Not many people would have the neerve too have characters that have such a taboo little fetish.
Seriously. Major kudos.
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