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 Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:41 am
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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:05 am
its all very well done 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:15 am
 Shocking...I know what you mean. Getting feedback is hard. I started a thread a few days ago and only one person commented on it.
Anyway, you're really good at coming up with character designs. They're all nice concepts. Sophie's my favorite out of these.
I've got some questions, though. Are those ribbons on the first guy's sword? And are there spots on or holes in the sword? I can't tell. And Sess has big, perky boobs, I guess? I thought gravity'd affect them. ...isn't it?
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 10:57 am
Very well done! I love these. ^-^
=o I feel ya on the feedback thing. My last few threads asking for help weren't replied to at all. o.o
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 11:07 am
I do enjoy your stuff as much as the next person,
but the only thing that bothers me sometimes is when you draw your folds in you clothing sometimes you overdo it and it seems very hectic and some lines even seem stray. I see it as overkill sometimes that's all, but sometimes it's great.
and sometimes I think you make little anitomical mistakes that you probably see yourself but kinda settle for less (well I do that so maybe you do it as well?)
such as invenetia concept, her shoulders look very flat and strange to me I think it's mostly just the way the head connects to the shoulders and it throws some of the torso off as well.
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2008 10:22 pm
I honestly love your art.
I agree with the clothes folding.. but it almost seem your style.
I don't feel right critiquing your art, because you are so much better than myself... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:40 am
@ Azure Yowkow:
Thank you! =D
@ Tenko72:
It has gotten really tough to get someone criticize your work, it's like people in here disappeared D=
About ribbons....they are not really ribbons, that's the headband.... <_< and Sees' boobies aren't affected by gravity at all, she went into plastic surgery to have them fixed. ninja
@ Nataku Urameshii:
I will try to be around more to give yah people feedback =D
@ gun_girl:
Like you said, 90% of the time I'm aware of the anatomy problems, as well as the folding ones, but I'm the kind of person that learns from it to be able to not make the same mistake with the next drawing.
I see your point with Venetia, it's actually how the head is positioned, so re-drawing it once again would/should fix the problem.
You know, there are three things I don't like to draw in human bodies, and those are hands, clothing folds and feet, specially in females, since they are more delicate and you have to put more attention to their curves and the delicacy of both hands and feet >_<
Btw, your signature has made me think dirty a few couple of times xd
@Phantom_Crazy:
Please feel free to critique as much as you want, and I'm not better than anyone.
I really think I suck right now, but maybe one day I will stop sucking so much and get better, but compared to the time when I first got here, I know for sure I've improved a lot =D
So don't be afraid and go ahead =3
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:45 am
[.Potemkin.] @ gun_girl:Like you said, 90% of the time I'm aware of the anatomy problems, as well as the folding ones, but I'm the kind of person that learns from it to be able to not make the same mistake with the next drawing. I see your point with Venetia, it's actually how the head is positioned, so re-drawing it once again would/should fix the problem. You know, there are three things I don't like to draw in human bodies, and those are hands, clothing folds and feet, specially in females, since they are more delicate and you have to put more attention to their curves and the delicacy of both hands and feet >_< Btw, your signature has made me think dirty a few couple of times xd lol yeah I know how you feel about just moving on to the next drawing... I honestly am surprised that not even I want to find some kind of perfection in my art... Till now at least I'm finally working on a drawing that I got some critisim on and I'm redrawing it lol I kow how you feel as well when it comes to the gender drawing. I'm not too great at drawing men, they always have this female look to them for me because I can't get the rough lines for them lol XD And I'm glad I got my message through to you with my signature lol XD
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:51 am
gun_girl [.Potemkin.] @ gun_girl:Like you said, 90% of the time I'm aware of the anatomy problems, as well as the folding ones, but I'm the kind of person that learns from it to be able to not make the same mistake with the next drawing. I see your point with Venetia, it's actually how the head is positioned, so re-drawing it once again would/should fix the problem. You know, there are three things I don't like to draw in human bodies, and those are hands, clothing folds and feet, specially in females, since they are more delicate and you have to put more attention to their curves and the delicacy of both hands and feet >_< Btw, your signature has made me think dirty a few couple of times xd lol yeah I know how you feel about just moving on to the next drawing... I honestly am surprised that not even I want to find some kind of perfection in my art... Till now at least I'm finally working on a drawing that I got some critisim on and I'm redrawing it lol I kow how you feel as well when it comes to the gender drawing. I'm not too great at drawing men, they always have this female look to them for me because I can't get the rough lines for them lol XD And I'm glad I got my message through to you with my signature lol XD The issue with the female look with men is better than having females look like men, trust me, I've gotten a few of the last xD
I might as well start fixing some of my drawings, maybe they'll look better lol
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