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Loves_Hina

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Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 4:41 pm

My most recent drawing. I thought it was pretty good so i decided to post it on here in hope of improvements.

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Anything from anatomy suggestions to details i should add aare severly welcome smile

Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 5:14 pm

really, no feedback...

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AngusMT

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Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 7:15 am

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This guild sure moves slow. Hmmm.

I just saw her hand and I think you should do some revisions?
But all-in-all, it looks good.

Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 4:20 pm

The pose is good and all but maybe fixing the hair could be a good idea. 3nodding

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Honeydew Lovely

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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:59 pm

The sketches are good but it seems that the body looks kinda long lol

Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:17 pm

Good drawing!!!

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oxellebellxo

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Posted: Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:11 am

ok so im avoiding studying now xd and im goin through random drawings so yea srry for the late reply :]
so for critique wise... all im gonna have to say is that the leg thats in front looks a little to bent. mayb straighten it out a bit or something. plus mayb fix her hair too because her cloak/cape w.e. it is [ mrgreen ] is like flowing out and then her hair is like just barely moving if u get wat im saying. ther then that tho it looks relli relli good. i love her facial expression biggrin

keep up the good workk mrgreen

Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:36 am

it isn't really a bad drawing, but maybe you sould try to colorize it? i like the details of her wand/mace? Her dress(cape?) looks nice and natural (I mean that they are flowing on the wind smile You should add more details on her face, and really, you should try to add color smile
4+ 4 u : smile

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