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 Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 4:35 pm
This is a colored avatar art I did for a friend. It was done on photoshop but drawn on paper first. I don't do much coloring , this being about my 4th attempt at photoshop, so I appreciate some help and advice on the coloring. Oh yeah feel free to comment on the other stuff too like proportion problems or lack of detail here and there. Thanks in advance. blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:27 pm
it looks really nice. i really like the coloring. maybe you could fix her body a little. her right breast is a little lower than her other one. try to line them up with her shoulders.
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 1:36 pm
WOW she is one skinny girl, but if thats your style go for it.
The imp on her head is a little too crooked and the tail is pretty skinny and short (if its the perspective than there should be some depth to it). It also looks like its flying just over her head, rather than sitting on it.
I agree with the other poster, that her boobs are lopsided, but I would add that, for their size they are also fairly high up on her body (at least her left one). Her shoulders seem too wide for her body, but that may just be because shes so unnaturally skinny, again if thats a style thing just ignore me smile
Over all though I REALLY love the colouring, especially on the scarf and bra.
Her skin does look a little pale though, when compared to the dramatic shading on her clothes and hair.
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 11:51 pm
Wow thanks a lot guys, I can see that really clearly now. yeah she is definitely way to skinny for her own good which , unfortunately, makes her shoulders seems unnaturally wide. And I think i can fix that boob problem if I made them slightly bigger. sweatdrop
Thanks again guys, I'll see if I can remedy these problems.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 1:15 am
It's really good, but the shape of her rib-cage and waist looks a bit awkward compared to the rest of the body. And the left forearm is a bit long, otherwise, I think it's brilliant.
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Posted: Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:32 am
i would say that she is too skiny, but the colors match each other and looks really nice. Her hair is well-drawn and I like the background (pink and purple)
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