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My manga character - Ace

Rutoro

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Posted: Sun Jan 04, 2009 1:58 pm

I would like some constructive critique on my newest drawing of one of my characters that I am planning on using in an upcoming manga.

His name is Ace and, even though he might look like one in this drawing, he's not a soldier... It's just his style.

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This is the black & white version and I am thinking of making a colored version.

I made the screentones in photoshop.

Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 7:09 pm

Shocking...

Is this sized down? I like the use of tones, but it seems like if it is sized down, the shading on his hair and face disappeared. If this is it at full-size, then the hair and face could use more shading.

I really like the way this looks. I like the tones, shading, and how he has his right hand.

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Kiri Hayabusa

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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 6:43 pm

he's hands and feet look a touch too small tome. but other then that he's cute ^.^

Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:02 pm

it looks really good to mee
no critique here from mee mrgreen

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Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 12:42 am

The legs are too short but other than that it's awesome.

Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:22 pm

I like it, it looks really professional. I just wish you made the pants a little bit longer and the feet a little longer. Besides that, beautiful.

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Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:21 am

Well done. Clearly very planned out.
However, I have a minor critique.
He seems rather emotionless in this picture. If you make a picture to represent an important character, they should probably have some sign of emotion.

And as for the colored version, I'd say go for it.

Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 7:39 am

Thanks for all the comments guys!! ^^

Tenko: No, it isn't sized down so the tones are probably alittle too light.

Guitar, Shiny & Kiri: I often make hands and feet alitte too small but I am working on it >:3 I also make the legs too short pretty often but that's because I run out of paper ^^;

Winds: Ok, I try to give him some more emotions next time :3

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