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 Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 9:00 pm
So I've been trying out a new style, using my wife's style to become more realistic, but still with the anime edge. I've already noticed a few things, like the female's chest being out of proportion and the male a bit anorexic [but that's how he's supposed to look like]. So I want your opinion. I'm planning on coloring this, but I want it to look as good as possible.
Critique~?
{edit} February 16, 2009
{Note: Old art. At least a month old.}
I've been working on the style still, and I want more critique, but this time on something else:
I need help with the girl. Ana's looking...strange. What can I do to make her look better? Critique = ♥~
And thank you guys for all the critique so far; it's really helping me~!
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 1:03 pm
overall its very well done I think. Two things though, (besides the girls boos lolz) the guy's neck looks too long. I know hes supposed to look skinny, so you can keep the width, but the length is off (try making his shoulders wider too, even if theres no fat on him, his bone structure should still follow general male characteristics). Second (well third I guess) the girl's eyes are too high on her face. her eyebrows are where her hairline should be. try lowering the eyes a little and raising her head line to give her a forehead too. I'd love to see it all done, it looks great biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 4:09 pm
omg this is relli good. i love the eyes and just the whole style mrgreen
so anyways all i relli have to say is that mayb the guys hand should be a but bigger but thats ur call there
other then that it looks good [other then the stuff u said too]
but yea it looks gooddd
keep up the good worrk biggrin
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Posted: Tue Feb 03, 2009 3:36 pm
I like the overall feel of the drawing but i think the mans shoulders are a little thin for his body.
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Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:53 am
You've picked up on the things I first noticed...hows about working on face shape? They look a little chunky y'know?
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 6:45 pm
Wow, this is really good =] only, the guy's cheek looks like it's sticking out a little far. Hope this helped =]
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