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Christica

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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 4:14 pm

Okay! I just did three [simple] pictures this week and I want to know what you think.

PS I've never posted but I joined a while ago... For the Tuts...

Picture 1: Dominance

Picture 2: Another Theme Day

Picture 3: I Can Feel You Here With Me

I just posted the links, click the titles of the pics, cause I think they are a little to big to post the picture itself. PLUS, the colors are off because of my scanner.

Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:29 pm

You have a ways to go, but you're getting there.
"Another Theme Day" is good, the one problem is lack of folds in the clothing. It looks alright with out them, but even a simple fold or two makes them look a bit more three dimensional.
"I Can Feel You Here With Me"...messy ink. @__@;
"Dominance" lacks form. The legs especially, need to look straight and a bit less flat and noodley. And once again, add some folds to the clothing!

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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:51 pm

they are ok for just starting

overall you are is very simple even if you did say they are simple it's a great idea to strive for me.
I honestly put out a good sketch like once a week and that's on a good week

time and detail to the antomy and clothing is very important

I think you so mostly focus on anatomy as of the moment and work your way towards clothing folds and style

keep it up smile

Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 9:38 pm

I agree that the most work is needed on anatomy. but don't forget proper folds and shading can also go a long way for a picture. good luck wink

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Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:31 pm

Those are great starts smile
I'd have to say to work on your overall anatomy more.

You are well on your way smile Good Luck <3

Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 10:26 pm

For "Them Day" I was experimenting for the folds. The dark lines on the outfits are supposed to be folds...

For "Here With Me" the one in white is inked sloppy on purpose to try and give the feel of him being a ghost...

As for "Dominance" that was, overall, me working on my anatomy and such. I already know I have trouble with poses, hands, and feet. Plus! I was kinda workin' on perspective...

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