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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:54 am
Just testing new clothing with some characters.
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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 4:31 pm
nice colouring, very smooth line art too. The only thing i don't think looks right is the bow in her hair, it seems too low... Thats just me though. Looks pro xd
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Posted: Mon Jan 26, 2009 5:08 pm
As always, I am in LOVE with your work. Just a few things that I notice.
Her breasts look to defined in the center, it makes it look kinda wonky and like her bra pulls them apart.
And her right leg (the one on our left) is angled out too far. Like her heel is too far out, I tried the pose and the way you have it now is nearly impossible. I'd change it so that it's a frontal view on the foot on our left because it's a lot more comfortable and natural.
But I love your coloring and lineart (seriously, how do you get it so good? gonk ).
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 3:19 pm
Seconded about the boobs. XD; The leg on our left should be seen almost as if we were looking it straight on from the front.
Also, her arms seem just a littttle bit too long.
Lovely work. ^^
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 9:43 pm
the colour and shading are great. I love the face! heart her left boob looks large, while the right one looks smaller. also something about the shoulders and more importantly the elbows is bothering me, not sure how to explain it htough sweatdrop sorry
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:33 pm
Lol thank you, it seems I'm still having problems with boobs xp
Maybe I should look up for reference pictures when drawing them? ninja
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