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 Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 8:35 am
Soo, yah. Just got a tablet and I'm in love with it.
Seriously.
I have trouple keeping myself from humping it.
Anyways.
Here are two things I've drawn with it
and I would really apreciate any advice on what I'm doing wrong wether it be colors/anatomy/not caling my grandma enough/whatever.
(Keep in mind I'm still getting used too it)
So yah.
Critique is much loved.
This is really just a 10 minute quick thing I did of my avi
But any advice on the colouring would be apreciated
This is a comission so the character and knifes are not mine.
The clothing/accecories are however my own design.
I didnt use any reference on the pose so I'm afraid it must be rather flawed, especialy the forshortening
so any advice on that would be loved.
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Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:01 pm
woah you are flippen awesome
I. really like your style
and the only thing wrong is on the second image her kicking legs looks a bit off.
other than that its great.
i would totally love to get a commission from you one day.
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Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:20 pm
Thank you!
=3
And yah.
That leg looks off.
I'm just not sure how too fix it
D:
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:40 am
The leg kicking is trying to be foreshortened, though its not quite working because only the foot is being foreshortened and not the ankle or shin.
What you can do is find the outside lines where the ankle meets with the foot and mark them and then continue the lines to the matching places where the leg meets the pelvis.
Then fill in the shape of the leg to the inside of the lines, and it should look more foreshortened.
PM if you don't understand what I just said, and I'll red line it for you if you want.
but man, serious kick-a** style babe
I'm lovin' it~ 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 3:53 am
I'd take a boot to the head by her
nice art btw, great motion.
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Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:01 am
Thanks Trickster :]
That was a lot of help.
:]
Thank you MetalPixel.
I wouldnt recomend getting that boot too the head though.
Looks painful.
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Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2009 10:50 am
klikkhaus Thank you MetalPixel.
I wouldnt recomend getting that boot too the head though.
Looks painful. Probably. XD
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