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oxellebellxo

PostPosted: Sun Mar 22, 2009 7:17 pm


hey guys!
havnt posted my art up here for awhile noww.
well heres one of my new pics:
http://oxellebellxo.deviantart.com/art/avi-art-116815280
its kinda like chibi...not relli. idk. u guys judge on that one :]
so anyways critiques r always appriciated
hope u guys like it :]
PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:38 pm


I don't know how tor really critique chibis because everyone has their own style of drawing them, and thats how you make them special and unique. I like it, even if one part of the head is bigger then the other XD.

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oxellebellxo

PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:40 pm


O.O
omg i knew something was wrong!!!! X/
o well....lopsided head....just another to add to that pile....lol
well ty anyways :]
PostPosted: Mon Mar 23, 2009 4:42 pm


No problem ^-^

Also, good job with the scarf. Thats one hard bugga to draw correctly D=

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 12:28 am


Like people already said , the head.
And I think the neck is a little bit too long as well and her shoulders a bit too wide to be feminine.
BTW , her one shoulder's also lower then the other too.

But good job ! n.n
PostPosted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 2:37 pm


ty Guitar Playin Fishie :]
it took me awhile to get it right...i wanted to make sure it looked good after my epic fail on my other drawing with it...[not showing the pic...it looked that bad lol]

and SweetCoffee,
i have a thing with sorta long necks with my drawings recently....lol [my giraffe ppls XD]
and i just noticed the sholder thing O.O didnt even c that...damn sholders lol and i made them a bit wide to get the proportions right but i guess i went a bit to far....o well :]
and ty very much biggrin

thanks u guys for the help!
other critiques r welcome too :]

oxellebellxo

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