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Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 12:32 am

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Left (me) is alllmost done with the lining.
I have to redo that gun (I'm scared of it), and reline the hands smoother.

Addy's needs the depth lining, and her gun and hands need to be relined.

AND THEN COLOR :D

Should my line thicknesses be more obvious or as is?
I think I can tell a difference between Addy and Myself enough when lookin at the style so ********. Addy's arm is too small. Iono if I wanna fix that.
It's 2:30am. gooooooodnight.

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:03 pm

I like it and the line thickness is okay.
But you're using the pen tool right?
You need to look at where the thicker part should go when you use pen pressure.
Like on the flicks of hair on the fringe, the thinner line should be at the end of the flick. Lines should be thicker where more lines meet toegther.

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Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 11:31 pm

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I like it and the line thickness is okay.
But you're using the pen tool right?
You need to look at where the thicker part should go when you use pen pressure.
Like on the flicks of hair on the fringe, the thinner line should be at the end of the flick. Lines should be thicker where more lines meet toegther.

(I'm using a tablet)
AH THANK YOU.
I know I'm supposed to make them thicker where things meet (like on leftgirls collars, and pockets).
But to be fair, two lines meet at the top AND bottom of the bangs, so I wasn't sure what end I should thicken.. so I guessed and did the bottom.
It makes more sense at the top, since that's where they'd potentially meet more hair lines, if I had been less lazy and drawn them though.

That's easily fixed though, thank you :3

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