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Addykat

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 10:55 pm


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It's obviously a shot from above and I dunno how I feel about the feets. The one arm is still bothering me, too.

The face will be changed in the final. 8| I just need help with the overall pose.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:00 pm


I know this doesn't help at all but I like it.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:03 pm


It all looks fine to me. The feet are too short is all, I think.
But everyoen draws feet too small.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:03 pm


Ythan II
I know this doesn't help at all but I like it.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:04 pm


Twist the right hand (the down hand) so it's pointing more righter. Like its kinda sticking forward as is make it so its spread out and the back of the hand is facing upwards. The thumb on that hand should then be facing forwards while the fingers hang down.

The feets are fine but the ankles are what you seem to be having issue, I don't really know what to do about that though.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:05 pm


With the angle you're going for the feet should be closer together and the entire body should kind of look like a capital Y (with the shoulders being the top and the feet being the bottom).
With what you have now it looks like the person is bending at the waist towards the viewer, and in that case you should make the legs longer.

Xahmen


Addykat

Dapper Krampus

PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:12 pm


Holy s**t I was not expecting so many replies so quick, especially so late.

Thanks! I'll post the changes in a sec.
PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:13 pm


Also give heem a bonar.

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Addykat

Dapper Krampus

PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:15 pm


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No bonar but I did fix it! Feets are maybe tooooo close together now. But I at least know what I gotta do now.

Thaaanks. C:
PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:44 pm


The hand looks good.

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Xahmen

PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 11:54 pm


PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 12:01 am


Except your lighting isn't great so your feet aren't visible even with the lights in my room turned off and my monitor brightness at full.

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Xahmen

PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 12:02 am


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Except your lighting isn't great so your feet aren't visible even with the lights in my room turned off and my monitor brightness at full.

Yeah well I tried ={
PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 12:12 am


It's okay, we all have darkness around us.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 30, 2009 1:17 am


It still looks like he's bending. His legs are too long and his hanging arm is too short.
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