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Black... my poem

KimiArain

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Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 4:30 pm


	Black is how i always feel. I never really truly heal. When it all turns red, I start to lose my head. Is it real or not? Please just let me rot. So if you think that my life lacks, Remember that you made it black.

Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2009 4:36 pm


	Wrong Forum. Anyways-- Besides the poem being over a boring and overused subject matter... It really doesn't flow. The syllables don't match up. Oh well! Keep writing! o:

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