O_o This... is amazing! did you blend the penciling in on the third picture? I really like the transition. I can't really find any faults in this, except maybe her waist/right shoulder (her way) are a tad funky. But nothing you'd see at first glance. Good job!
That. Looks. Awesome. Sorry, I have nothing to add except that the funky stuff that hyper mentioned on the shoulder (the one further away from us) could easily be fixed by altering on tiny line. 'Push' that bump (I think it's supposed to be the shoulder) a little further down the arm so that it turns into a muscle (or remove it completely) so that the arm joins the body a little bit further down. Her pose hints that the shoulder can be hidden out of view.
Posted: Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:03 pm
Very well done! I can only see one flaw, and it's the one Hyper and Aryllia already mentioned. How did you make the colors blend like that? I don't have any programs that can do that, so... yeah. Cruddy non-colored art for me. .__.
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