I've got some specific points I'd like help with, but I'm also looking for any general critique you've got going.
Stuff I want to know most;
-the body from this angle; can you tell that she's sat leaning up against a wall without a background? Would a background clarify, or is the anatomy (or folds in top) too off for that?
-Drawing hair from above. And are the hilights in the right place?
-Does the blood look suitable? (considering the colouring style)
-The folds where the edges of the skirt sit on the floor
-foreshortening on upper arms, is it too much or too little?
-Anything else, I'll have that too.
Well, here's the piccy!
There's a larger version on my deviantart, same name, if it'll help.