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Please critique my art?

Aoi Twizted Ragnarok

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Posted: Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:24 pm

This is Greed from my story:
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Please tell me what you think? And can you guess what I drew it from? :] Only 2 people have figured it out

Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 12:02 am

my comps not letting me open the links could ya pm them

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Aoi Twizted Ragnarok

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Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:02 am

Yeah, sure. Sending now.

Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 11:34 am

its a piece of shiittt!!!

lol no im joking its really good~ lol
i like it^^

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Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:03 pm

it looks good, i would consentrait alittle more on shadeing and highlighting though. it looks alittle flat.

Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 12:48 pm

For the edges try thicker lines, so it doesn't look at half finished, or use a grey color line tool and trace the edges of the picture.
It'll also get ride of the sketchy white line that's showing from the black background.
It's looks pretty nice though.
:3

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