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Dream Avi Art: Critique Please?

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kourtneybarakat

PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:27 pm


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Critique please, i know I'm not very good... Please don't be really rude. Constructive critism is appreciated. If anyone knows any good tutorials, please post, because, as you can see, I stink at drawing them. The hand is supposed to be clenched into a fist, I know it doesn't look like it, but it is supposed to. smile
PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 7:28 pm


I JUST NOTICED I didn't color part of it. ^.^' So please ignore the uncolored part of a hand.

kourtneybarakat


Doctor Nitrus Brio

PostPosted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 8:16 pm


I suggest moving her RIGHT hand in front of her hair. :3
PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:42 pm


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Not bad, but the hand should be on top not beneath....
Join today! We have nail polish and rings! Don't forget the hair brushes and hair ties to pull up your insanely long hair!

Distant Starlite


anomonus

PostPosted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 10:37 pm


the hair is so... stiff (did I spell stiff right?) its really good though, and the hands are a little small unless you were intending it to be that way.
i usally draw a lot of curls, but your picture looks like you made it on paint.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:53 pm


i agree with everyone else here. Pretty good for a drawing made on paint 3nodding looks like you put the head a little too far back on the neck... if you know what i mean, cuz i dont...
keep up the good work!

Unwilting Rose


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Gambino Gaian

PostPosted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:15 am


Best hand tutorial I have ever seen
Really, I mean it. That tutorial helped me heaps, and it is written in a very amusing and encouraging way. If you are interested in more tutorials (feet, pose, face etc.) just scroll down the page to the Author's Comment.
Once you know the basic role for the anatomy (palm+knuckles+fingers) you simply have to practise until infinity 3nodding

Filling a paper with various hands is a quite amusing way to practise without having to fiddle with the whole body!
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