can you rate my avi and give me some ideas on how to make it better?
Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:40 pm
You should really use the "Rate the avi" thread here. I see you already have last post there, even! I'm sure someone will come up and give you some tips any minute now! biggrin
Most people that go there, only post when they get a new look going. I, for instance, haven't been yet since I've stuck with this look for a while.
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:09 pm
Though it appears that no one wants to judge you in either thread. Since I finally have some time to spare, I will give you some advice.
You've definitely got a theme going. All-in-all a sound look, but just a few things look too cluttered. Your "wing," for instance; the wing should just be removed. It adds nothing to your look beyond more black, and you don't need that here. Then there's the fire. It's good in theory, but the look from it and the thin size of it cause your avatar some imbalances. A better fire might be from the Diapered Egg. One last thing, since I'm going all out, would be that damned ninja mask. I never like it when someone uses it for a black avatar. It's not black it's some blue-shaded black. The best thing for you to replace it is with the Wingding shirt. It has a mask pose that's perfect black instead of that.
Really though? There's nothing wrong with your avatar. It's great for how you used what you had at hand. 8/10
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 12:46 pm
thanks. xD thats the kind of response i was lookin for.