I'd like some helpful advice on what I can do to improve. Besides making the hand more anatomically correct. Comments?
Posted: Sun Jan 24, 2010 11:45 am
While I like how smooth your overall picture looks, I feel that the shading is too smooth. There are areas where the shadows should be harder and darker. Actually I feel that the entire picture could go darker to get a better contrast effect. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 2:07 pm
I can see that. Thanks! 3nodding
Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:23 am
I see how you did the shading around where the sun goes through the leaves and on to her. I'd say, maybe instead of trying to blend the light in, make it more bold. Like, really show where the sun hits. Other than that I say well done, very nice :3
Everything everyone else has said, generally more shadow everywhere. The forests tend to be darker if you go inside and the trees in the back look lighter than the one in the front. After that there is a mysterious green wall (?) The grass has the same issue: darker and bluer in the back and lighter and yellower in the front. Also the hair behind her head should be darker than the bangs. Also some more shadow under the boobs.
Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 3:46 pm
I agree what everyone is saying about the shadows, but you should work on the hair and wings some more. The hair looks clumpy and akward, especially around the horn. The wings, you could try detailing them a bit more and vary the length of the feathers to make it look more natural.