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 Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 12:20 pm
Ello'
So, like, I'm preparing to open up an art shop, so I'm working on the banner below.
Anyway, I need some help with his shoulders, since they look a little awkward and apparently I can't seem to fix them.
Redlines/advice would be great.
This is just a WIP right now, I'm going to add some color and render it more.
I'm actually working on the hair/horns area currently (which is why the horns look different).
Feel free to point out anything that needs work. : D'
http://i50.tinypic.com/2ihp07l.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/209hpvm.jpg
EDIT: UPDATE
Wooow, I can't believe I forgot to update this. I finished this drawing long ago.
Ah well, posting anyway.
Still looking for critiques if you guys spot anything wrong xp
CLICK IT, CLICK IT NOW
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:18 pm
That looks amazing, but the shoulder to the left seems to be... absent. It's hard to say even that, though, without knowing what the rest of the body is intended to be posed like. Maybe it could get a bit more vertical when it's in line with the middle joint on that pinky. Speaking of which, that pinky looks a bit long, and perhaps the pinky and ring fingers are appearing on a strange, unintended angle. I dunno, I think the lighting around the pinky makes it look like it's really sticking out from the hand rather than being more in line with the palm. I dunno, something around there seems a bit off to me.
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:50 pm
Thanks. I had intended for his body to be turned towards the left, but apparently I didn't pull that off correctly, so the shoulders look wacked.
Holy crap, I did make the a long pinky
I see what you're saying about the hand, I'll work on that.
Also; updated the original pic cause I worked on it a little and lightened it up a bit.
I'M WORKING ON THIS SLOWLY BUT SURELY.
I'm almost done, I just need to fix the hair some more and finish that damn hand.
I can't seem to get the hand to look right, so if anyone has any suggestions on that, please share.
I also made him look much younger compared to the earlier version
sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 12:18 am
UPDATE THAT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED WEEKS AND WEEKS AND WEEKS AGO.
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Posted: Mon May 03, 2010 7:10 am
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