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 Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:48 pm
白い外 暖かくなる 鳥の歌
Shiroi soto atatakakunaru tori no uta
The white outside starts to become warm. A bird's song.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:38 pm
I think anyone can put random phrases or words together.
I hate poetry.
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 9:19 pm
Streetlight Fights I think anyone can put random phrases or words together. I hate poetry.
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:07 am
It's really not random
Maybe I shouldn't have translated them the way I did. It makes them seem a little more random. There are quite a few rules I have to follow in Japanese. Grammar is less flexible and syllables are far more containing.
The reason I've never cared for haiku before is that I agreed with your ideas of poetry being random phrases that people over analyse. The accomplishment is more creating poetry in Japanese than in English. I think perhaps the translations distracted from that. I'll translate them more directly.
Otherwise, 簡単だたら、日本語で俳句を書いて下さい。
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:08 am
 And lol at anybody saying that it doesn't follow form or whatever - poetry is poetry. You do whatever the ******** you want.
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:32 am
I suppose seeking appreciation for Japanese poetry from people that can't read it is digging for gold in a coal mine neutral
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 1:15 am
Lol maybe.
I do like it in English, though. I can't appreciate it in Japanese BUT I did notice right away that the symbols matched up. 3-5-3. :3
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:58 am
Reading these haiku
Makes me feel art-y and stuff
Because I speak good.
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Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 11:48 pm
Addykat And lol at anybody saying that it doesn't follow form or whatever - poetry is poetry. You do whatever the ******** you want. Actually, in Japanese haiku, it's not whatever you want. Haikus don't have any rules in English besides 5-7-5, but they do in Japanese.
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Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 1:10 am
Well, yeah. :3 But for the English parts you can do what you wanna.
Iii like them. Haikus are my favorite kind of poetry. I wish I could understand the Japanese ones but I enjoy your translations. XD
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Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 5:09 am
WRITE SOMEUH THEM FUNNY HI-KOOS gonk
ED: but on the real (like a navy SEAL), they're tight. Also perfect example of what Addy was saying: ee cummings
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Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 11:38 pm
What do you use to type Japanese characters?
Also Poetry is beautiful. I love it. =X
Haikus are really easy though.
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