Fake Flowers ~A poem

[Pandamoneyelephant00]

When the flowers are fake
Can the love be real
Or does it all just fade away?
When the flowers are fake
Are they as beautiful
Or is there no beauty at all?
When the flowers are fake
Do they have a meaning?
When the flowers are fake
Do they last as long
Or do they wilt twice as fast?
When the flowers are fake
Can the love be real?

~Any comments?  

[Terix_FM]

(ugh, nobody evr comments anymore. i think the guild is dying.)

i like it, it reminds me of something im sure i heard before, about fake gifts.

it seems like the poem is unfinished though, or like it's just a part of something bigger. i dunno, it's weird.  

[Pandamoneyelephant00]

Terix_aptor

(ugh, nobody evr comments anymore. i think the guild is dying.)

i like it, it reminds me of something im sure i heard before, about fake gifts.

it seems like the poem is unfinished though, or like it's just a part of something bigger. i dunno, it's weird.

I never heard anything about fake gifts before. I just wrote it when I was bored in English class.

Yea... it does seem like it's to a bigger picture. Ah well maybe I'll come up with something else to go with it...