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[.Potemkin.]

PostPosted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:35 pm


So I was searching through my files and found an interesting folder with the label "Drafts" and since I didn't remember what I put in there I decided to check it out.

It was very surprising to find old works and work in progress of a few months old, but specially a lot of sketches that never saw the light of day.

Among them, there was one that caught my eye and is this one:

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Lines might be faint, but is because I set up my brush to low opacity so I don't have to mess later with the transparency bar. -Anyways! can you point out what's wrong?

I'm thinking of completing it surprised
PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:14 pm


How can I critique something I cant even come close to? *wails* I think you done great.....


Gielwich


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Zantetsken

PostPosted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 8:52 pm


Everything appears to be in order... The collar bone perhaps isn't centered, and maybe the other breast would be visible/pressing against the other one if they're that big/pushed up, but I dunno about that.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 11:04 am


Great drawing. Maybe the ears should be placed lower, but it's not a big mistake, everything else is just as it should be. I really like it.

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