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The Orphan ~ A Found Poem

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 3:47 pm
In the austere hall that was bathed in sunlight,
I lay back on my clean white pillow,
Thinking of the tears I saw in the young soul's eyes.
He looked up at me, and his face had lit up with a strange fire.
It seemed, to me, that I was the embodiment of all heroism and liberty to him,
But alas, I am not, not yet.

As I lay there thinking,
A young orphaned girl comes her cheeks rosy and shining,
Her colorful linens showing she is well taken of.
As she smiled at me, I knew deep in my heart that there was hope for these unfortunate souls.

~Lieutenant Bubbles

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All right, this is called a "found poem". I did this for school in eighth grade. I've been told it's one of my best poems. Anyway, the story I used for this found poem was, I believe, A Diary for Anne Frank. No, I do not see myself as some savior ((as I've been told this poem makes it sound)), I just like writing in first person. And... Let's see... At the time I made this, I had a... fascination, of sorts, with orphans.

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:12 pm
I always admire people who could write poetry. 3nodding This one is great! But I gotta admit, since poetry is not my forte, I was having a little trouble with wondering whether or not the persona in the poem was the orphan, or where he/she was, or where the other kids saw him/her. 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 9:45 am
That was good!!! My poems can be emo and/or deep... But they're never happy....


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I can't believe I never answered y'all. T.T

@Kitsune: Thank you. User Image The speaker, I believe, is someone who's just trying to do something to help orphans, and is staying somewhere where a little orphan girl was taken in. 3nodding

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I would like to write some deep poems, but I'm not very good at that. xd



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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2011 1:51 pm
I love it. It was really good. You put a lot of time and ever into it and it could be easy tell here. An amazing job. 3nodding  
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Why thank you. User Image

You should try making a found poem yourself. They're a lot of fun. xd



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