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 Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 6:41 pm
Deary me, I had a Kuroshitsuji moment once again. And I liked it. ಠ‿ಠ ಠ‿ಠ ಠ‿ಠ ಠ‿ಠ ಠ‿ಠ Please critique on anything. I seriously don't care. Whether may it be coloring or anatomy or I don't know...llamas for all I know. I want to make my pictures in the future more and more pretty. D< 
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Posted: Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:06 pm
Well, the brightness of the picture is bothering me. It's making it hard to thoroughly examine certain details. He sorta looks like he's glowing.
What I like:
-The eye looks nice.
-The flowers and thorny stems look nice.
-The colours you used for everything... Well, I'd like duller colours on the skin, but I like the colours you picked for the shading and less illuminated parts.
-The colouring on the hair and flowers in particular look nice.
-Pretty nice looking picture overall. I'm not sure if those diamond checkers in the background fit the picture, but I sorta like them, anyways.
What I don't like:
-I think the ear is too big. Also seems like it might not be connected to his head where it should be.
-The blue diamonds in the background aren't as precise as they could be... That must be pretty tedious, but I think you should make careful measurements and use a ruler to ensure they'd all be the same size/shape.
-The shading on his neck almost makes it look like he's been strangled?
-I don't like the loose white lines you have on his hair, but maybe that's just your style.
-The shape of the shirt's collar doesn't seem symmetrical in design.
-Shirt could maybe use some folds inside.
-Can't tell the shirt from the arms.
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