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 Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 11:27 pm
HERE edited
It definitely needs cleaning up and perfecting, but now the hard part is done! Please give me as much feedback as you want to!
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 5:53 pm
Cait.
This is beautiful. I teared up.
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 10:53 am
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 4:05 pm
Link fixed! Sorry, Nicole.
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 11:57 pm
In case you are actually interested in giving a critique, look these questions over, watch the movie and then write some answers, yo.
-Does the bumpiness of the bridge footage distract you from the audio? If so, any idea how to remedy this?
-Which interviews stood out to you? Which lacked interest?
-Does the narration toward the end seem less natural/too directed?
-What feeling does the room footage give? Describe.
-How to do come away feeling about the content of the piece?
-Do you think the title is inappropriate due to the context of the film? If so, why?
-Does the music in the beginning and ending of the piece feel inappropriate or forced?
-Are there pieces of dialogue that feel too long to you? Too short? If so, specify.
-Were there any distractingly noticeable jumps in audio? Specify if possible.
-Any other questions, comments or concerns?
Thank you and enjoy!
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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 7:52 am
awawaw so pretty and cute and aw. crying
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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 3:42 pm
-Does the bumpiness of the bridge footage distract you from the audio? If so, any idea how to remedy this?
No. Not at all.
-Which interviews stood out to you? Which lacked interest?
Anytime you or Josh talked. I thought they were all interesting, though. Especially that lady who was like
I FINALLY FOUND YOU AFTER ALL THESE YEARS.
-Does the narration toward the end seem less natural/too directed?
No, I love ittttt.
-What feeling does the room footage give? Describe.
Sincere...ness, I suppose. Personal, too.
-How to do come away feeling about the content of the piece?
how to do come away feeling
It was really great. I teared up, so cute.
-Do you think the title is inappropriate due to the context of the film? If so, why?
Nope.
-Does the music in the beginning and ending of the piece feel inappropriate or forced?
Nope.
-Are there pieces of dialogue that feel too long to you? Too short? If so, specify.
Nope, but there are some gaps where no one is talking and they seem too long.
-Were there any distractingly noticeable jumps in audio?
Specify if possible.
Nah.
-Any other questions, comments or concerns?
I LOVE YOU MOM
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