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 Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:55 pm
I just wanted to share this with all of you - Hope you enjoy reading ^^
I really enjoy to do these small one-shot/drabble like fic's.
Title: Beautiful Disaster
Rating: K+
Summary: The last thoughts and actions from a dying man – intercepted by the loving hands of an Ulquihime supporter. ;3
Ulquiorra never thought that grief, remorse and regret would enter his secluded world – that the bitter taste of her tears would mark his mind like acid. He was forever marked by her.
She had broken him into pieces like a simple puzzle; removing every piece with the outmost care and fixed it again, while adding the piece that had always been missing. A piece he would never be able to find without her.
He closed his eyes in a moment of pure tiredness – his body caressed by the wind as if it had every intention to speed up the inevitable process of his mind and body fading away. Time was short and for once, it meant something to him.
Earlier, time had never been of any concern; time was simply a non existing term to give humans some structure in their lives. However, he suddenly felt oppressed by this term because he knew that it would break him apart; take his sight, take his taste, take his feelings, take his everything.
He was jammed by time… and he couldn't accept it.
He slowly lifted his eyes to gaze at the last person he needed to come clean with – the last person to actually bring some meaning and color to his otherwise white and black world.
Words left his mouth – gibberish that held no purpose in comparison to the words he so desperately needed, desired, longed! To say.
He somehow knew the answer already… but it didn't matter. He needed to know.
"Do I scare you, Woman?"
How he craved to touch her in that moment. It was like a fire starting in the pit of his stomach, spreading to the hole in his chest, onto his arms and all the way down to the delicate tip of his fingers.
He had never felt anything like it before as he awaited her reaction – his arm outstretched towards her with the last amount of strength his body could muster.
His sight was slowly fading as well; his mind, eyes and being all directed towards her to drink in whatever reaction she was gonna have.
She had always been so unbelievably strong… strong, but yet so very fragile. If he held her too close she would shatter… and yet, if they were presented with trials of their own she was able to face them and never let go of her beliefs – those unneeded believes that kept weighing her down.
He deeply admired that side of her… a thing he honestly regretted not being able to tell her before it was too late.
But even though regret nagged at his mind, different feelings pushed it aside;
He felt glad… relieved… content… satisfied.
And nothing could ever change it.
"I'm not scared"
He watched her with focused green eyes – drinking her expression while her soft words echoed in his mind.
She had never been scared of him…and that, even though she had every reason in the world to quiver in fear by his mere presence. Instead, she had embraced it with open arms – allowing him into the almost unbearable warmth that was her.
She had changed him in ways he couldn't even understand…
"I see…"
He closed his eyes before gazing at her for the last time, and when she lifted her arm, trying to reach him as well, he felt like smiling.
Everything suddenly made sense…
He had found her heart…
And even in death, he wasn't gonna let go of it.
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Posted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:13 pm
Not bad, but thing is Ulquiorra isn't dead, at least in my opinion, that is. I can explain why he isn't, but I've given that speech way too many times.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:52 am
I don't believe he's dead either ^^
I just chose to describe him sa a dying man since I personally think that gave it more impact.
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Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:09 pm
Thats quite a choice you made. My fanfic on Ulquiorra (well, not really about him, it was a free-for-all kill on Twilight and Ulquiorra was included in there. It showed how many ways Twilight characters can die) was comedic.
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